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quickens the bloodlust
dissonate soul
open your black tablet
and proceed to cause discomfort amongst the host
listless need will you relent?
if not, I will in depths unknown
and hearts reendowed shake your internal temple
I am the fear bringer
I linger at the doors of your heart
blackening your days and terrifying your heart
I seek redemption for all the I am
after all I bring out the best in you
soul charmer, you vixen
we follow you everywhere
with discoveries everyday
we know where you like to play
gentle viper you prefer your victims lulled into sleep
dazed and confused they wander
until in deadly throes you strike
feasting off the pain
we know you will refrain from taking action now
you are a martyr to your own kind
starving yourself of the divine foods you desire
it is a blood sacrifice you need
drink in deep and fill the hunger
insidious greed be fed at last
Published 16th Mar 2023
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2023 5:21pm
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hello Mr. Black greetings and thank you most graciously for the serious and beautiful review...I have known myself to be vampire since I was very little...it's something I've resisted...choosing not to eat but I must to survive my tastes are such that I feel bad feasting on another suffering don't get me wrong some are deserving...I rarely attend the masquerade...I prefer to hunt alone...
I feel your presence here I rarely connect with the horde...I am different than most darklings they are my family but accept me as I am...I pray I follow traditions not as humans but accepting that the greatest darkness is our Father who created us... he himself feasts...we are born of the void of the dark we were the first creation we are ancient...I don't touch my black tablet often because I could get lost in its depths...I am powerful witch as well...
I want to greet you properly thank you...
sincerely Crimsin
I feel your presence here I rarely connect with the horde...I am different than most darklings they are my family but accept me as I am...I pray I follow traditions not as humans but accepting that the greatest darkness is our Father who created us... he himself feasts...we are born of the void of the dark we were the first creation we are ancient...I don't touch my black tablet often because I could get lost in its depths...I am powerful witch as well...
I want to greet you properly thank you...
sincerely Crimsin
16th Mar 2023 9:47pm
19th Mar 2023 11:46pm
"soul charmer, you vixen" the vampire lore is always intriguing with its dark theme and seduction, it always makes for great poetry couple with your awesome delivery.
