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reckoning
snubbed by the elite for being different
I excel doing things otherwise
enchantment grace please show me your face
in darkness gloom I need some growing room
in the depths where I soar, my mind is sore of worry
I cast a spell, I request legion to do my bidding
at my behest they are sent on the winds
to affect in my favor the future fate of my soul
I attend the grand masquerade
making love with my chosen host
I seek retribution for services rendered
did you think I was a free whore?
insidious need overtook me
and I did succumb to the greed of my cunt
I speak with authority this is no mystery
you know who you deal with me
I am an obscene Queen
affecting the horde
torment true undo the hex or you will be next
behold your doom, in the reckoning room
your fears realized
Published 17th Mar 2023
| Edited 18th Mar 2023
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I can't help but bask in your delicious darkside that freely makes it's powerful presence front and center without apology.... As it should be!
So many great lines that evoke this heady visceral impact. You remind, with each pen stroke why is feel like you're forever the reigning Queen of Darkness.
Phenomenal ink, Brenda
🥀🖤🥀
B
(exceptional pic!)
So many great lines that evoke this heady visceral impact. You remind, with each pen stroke why is feel like you're forever the reigning Queen of Darkness.
Phenomenal ink, Brenda
🥀🖤🥀
B
(exceptional pic!)
17th Mar 2023 8:56pm
good afternoon beautiful Blue your review of my poem and myself is luscious I felt it in my soul...you made me smile and moved me deeply thank you lovely lady you are an artist in a league of your own I love your writing 💕
17th Mar 2023 10:00pm
I have to agree here, you are the exquisite queen of darkness, commanding your words. And the pic was outrageously cool. 🖤
18th Mar 2023 1:36am
hello beautiful Debbie thank you for such a lovely comment you are deeply appreciated 💕
18th Mar 2023 5:20am
I envy the acceptance within you
There's a power in authenticity
Blended with artistry
There's a power in authenticity
Blended with artistry
18th Mar 2023 8:43am
the darkness in this is scary,
but the fact that you open up and embrace it.
it's such a beautiful thing...
great ink
but the fact that you open up and embrace it.
it's such a beautiful thing...
great ink
18th Mar 2023 2:26pm
Dearest Crimsin,
Your words sing with the passion and the fire of one who refuses to be held back by the constraints of society. You are a creature of the night, forged in the fires of adversity and empowered by the darkness that surrounds you.
You are not one to be ignored or dismissed, for your very being demands attention and respect. The elite may snub you for your differences, but they do not understand the true power and potential that lies within you.
Enchantment and grace are indeed worthy pursuits, for they are the hallmarks of a creature that knows herself and is confident in her abilities. And yet, you also seek growth and expansion, a desire to soar to new heights and to claim what is rightfully yours.
In the depths of the darkness, you confront your fears and worries, facing them head-on with a fierce determination that is both admirable and intimidating. And when you seek to influence your future fate, you do so with a power that can bend the very winds to your will.
But even the mighty can succumb to the allure of desire, and it is clear that you are no exception to this rule. Yet, you are not to be underestimated or misjudged, for you are an Obscene Queen, a force to be reckoned with and a ruler of the horde.
Your torments are true, and your hexes are potent. You are a creature of power and cunning, and those who underestimate you do so at their own peril.
But even in the midst of your reign, you remain aware of the darker truths of your existence. The reckoning room awaits us all, and none can escape the final judgment.
It is a privilege to converse with one such as you, Crimsin, and I look forward to witnessing the full extent of your power and influence in the days to come.
Yours in darkness,
Mr Black
Your words sing with the passion and the fire of one who refuses to be held back by the constraints of society. You are a creature of the night, forged in the fires of adversity and empowered by the darkness that surrounds you.
You are not one to be ignored or dismissed, for your very being demands attention and respect. The elite may snub you for your differences, but they do not understand the true power and potential that lies within you.
Enchantment and grace are indeed worthy pursuits, for they are the hallmarks of a creature that knows herself and is confident in her abilities. And yet, you also seek growth and expansion, a desire to soar to new heights and to claim what is rightfully yours.
In the depths of the darkness, you confront your fears and worries, facing them head-on with a fierce determination that is both admirable and intimidating. And when you seek to influence your future fate, you do so with a power that can bend the very winds to your will.
But even the mighty can succumb to the allure of desire, and it is clear that you are no exception to this rule. Yet, you are not to be underestimated or misjudged, for you are an Obscene Queen, a force to be reckoned with and a ruler of the horde.
Your torments are true, and your hexes are potent. You are a creature of power and cunning, and those who underestimate you do so at their own peril.
But even in the midst of your reign, you remain aware of the darker truths of your existence. The reckoning room awaits us all, and none can escape the final judgment.
It is a privilege to converse with one such as you, Crimsin, and I look forward to witnessing the full extent of your power and influence in the days to come.
Yours in darkness,
Mr Black
Today 00:25am
"I am an obscene Queen" spoken with authority from her throne.
Your subjects are spellbound.
Your subjects are spellbound.
