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tragic~ with the talented Indie
desolate of soul I reach to you
with my heart bared
sacred sorrow floods us
the gate has opened
pitiless day don't look
shrouded in pain a woman of disdain seeks companionship
broken of hope in the darkness groans
I bathe in an ocean of tears
that threatens to drown me
I reach out and find only myself
in this abyss of my own making
honesty weeps for the truth in the naked dawn
I ache in regret
time will unwind and one day be kind to me
in death's throes there shall be no tears
Published 14th Mar 2023
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Anonymous
14th Mar 2023 3:53pm
Wow, you two together Are a powerful force.💕
14th Mar 2023 4:11pm
14th Mar 2023 8:14pm
15th Mar 2023 1:34am
Heartwrenching and amazing.
You two are a fucking force of nature alone... together... dear lord help we poor mortals. I love the blend so much, I mean SO much. Y
You two are a fucking force of nature alone... together... dear lord help we poor mortals. I love the blend so much, I mean SO much. Y
15th Mar 2023 2:01am
hello lovely Betty thank you graciously from my heart you always make my days brighter and nighttime's too❤️ we both thank you, you know I've known Indie a long time and if I'm remembering right she is my first collab. partner...
16th Mar 2023 2:14am
"Honesty weeps...in the naked Dawn"
That line is priceless
and unforgettable
Damn
Y'all created a Classic
That line is priceless
and unforgettable
Damn
Y'all created a Classic
19th Mar 2023 9:33pm
"I bathe in an ocean of tears
that threatens to drown me"
Enjoyed the metaphorical and visual acuity in this.
Excellent collab.
that threatens to drown me"
Enjoyed the metaphorical and visual acuity in this.
Excellent collab.
