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oddity
you came in on a lonely wind
smelling of a man
dirty and odd
still, I stare at you like you are the only one in the room
because in my weird way
I like you just like this
hair messed, mascara smeared, tasting like sex
you are erotism personified
your art is smut
your cunt the canvas where his tongue paints
getting the best of you, the worst of you
you clean yourself in my rain when you feel too dirty
no other explanation needed
smelling of a man
dirty and odd
still, I stare at you like you are the only one in the room
because in my weird way
I like you just like this
hair messed, mascara smeared, tasting like sex
you are erotism personified
your art is smut
your cunt the canvas where his tongue paints
getting the best of you, the worst of you
you clean yourself in my rain when you feel too dirty
no other explanation needed
Published 14th Mar 2023
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Anonymous
14th Mar 2023 7:16pm
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14th Mar 2023 7:28pm
thank you most graciously for your thoughtful review... I don't find conventional beauty beautiful... I think it's fake I like what some deem is ugly or macabre...
the sex act itself can be messy as you know if done write it is sometimes humbling even...accepting each other in such a vulnerable state is important...
women are beautiful in their femininity and I find even what I call simpletons lovely...there is a place for all of us...
this is about a woman who breaks the mold maybe even more that one woman I know...I am not usually attracted to other women but these turn me on...
I feel like sex is cleansing it helps us purify our souls
ridding of us for a moment of aggression and sadness or even hate... it is a vital human expression and reinforces bonds...
I deeply appreciate your time and comments ❤️
the sex act itself can be messy as you know if done write it is sometimes humbling even...accepting each other in such a vulnerable state is important...
women are beautiful in their femininity and I find even what I call simpletons lovely...there is a place for all of us...
this is about a woman who breaks the mold maybe even more that one woman I know...I am not usually attracted to other women but these turn me on...
I feel like sex is cleansing it helps us purify our souls
ridding of us for a moment of aggression and sadness or even hate... it is a vital human expression and reinforces bonds...
I deeply appreciate your time and comments ❤️
14th Mar 2023 7:21pm
Straight and to the point. That’s what I call, and no pun intended, not beating around the bush. Lovely poem poetress. 👍🏻
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19th Mar 2023 9:51pm
"you are erotism personified
your art is smut
your cunt the canvas where his tongue paints "
certainly leaves us reeling in imaginations.
your art is smut
your cunt the canvas where his tongue paints "
certainly leaves us reeling in imaginations.
