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the watcher
you tilted my world sideways
I will never be the same
I am forever altered by the violence in your stare
raping my soul of its secrets
a voyeur with a passion so deep it penetrated me wholly
I exist because you watch
Published 14th Mar 2023
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14th Mar 2023 11:45am
So impactful in its brevity. This is very thought provoking... that last line - WOW. Awesome write.
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14th Mar 2023 4:21pm
good morning beautiful poetess thank you graciously I'm so happy you liked this 💕
14th Mar 2023 1:53pm
HOLY FUCK... I exist because you watch is one of those stellar lines that make the world tilt on its access.
Crim, that was fucking amazing. The entire thing was a deadly challenge, and was laced with heat.
Crim, that was fucking amazing. The entire thing was a deadly challenge, and was laced with heat.
14th Mar 2023 4:22pm
wowee I live for comments like yours I truly respect you as a writer and person you made my week ❤️
19th Mar 2023 9:00pm
"I am forever altered by the violence in your stare" profound and scary.
Great ink.
Great ink.
