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The devil ruled
It was her heart he wanted
She would not give him the time of day
With good reasons,
For he was not like her, in any way
He tought he was nice
Found out he was mean, meaner
As his anger by the minute grew
Still he pursued, his thoughts
Growing increasingly darker and darker
As by Satan he was led
And even darker lines and thoughts
By the Devil he was fed
Till he killed her, knifed her heart out
The heart now kept in a mirrored box.
She would not give him the time of day
With good reasons,
For he was not like her, in any way
He tought he was nice
Found out he was mean, meaner
As his anger by the minute grew
Still he pursued, his thoughts
Growing increasingly darker and darker
As by Satan he was led
And even darker lines and thoughts
By the Devil he was fed
Till he killed her, knifed her heart out
The heart now kept in a mirrored box.
Published 12th Mar 2023
Author's Note
.........for the emo or gothic comp..........
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13th Mar 2023 2:46pm
I totally have a knife thing, so I'm all over the unrequited love that ends in murder theme! YES! That kicked ass.
13th Mar 2023 2:49pm
Glad you like. Of course it is preferable that such remain in fiction, naturally. Regards, Robert.
13th Mar 2023 3:06pm
13th Mar 2023 5:53pm
I know, i know..........but a few years back a cardiologist around here, totally mad that his wife cheated on him with a good friend of theirs, killed their two lovely little kids. A knife used. Blood all over the place. (Amazingly he was found not guilty because of temporary insanity.........a second trial could have ended up the same way, but sanity ruled and he's in jail for a good while yet.) Regards, Robert.
