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dilemma of life
To whom
should we go ?
and ask for the dawn of life?
people are still talking about
the darkness of their own lives.
In front of which heart
should we express our dryness?
everyone is still sitting
under the scorching sun of their own life.
should we go ?
and ask for the dawn of life?
people are still talking about
the darkness of their own lives.
In front of which heart
should we express our dryness?
everyone is still sitting
under the scorching sun of their own life.
Published 10th Mar 2023
Author's Note
Life is sometimes like the waves of the sea and sometimes like the dry sand.
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10th Mar 2023 9:28am
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10th Mar 2023 9:49am
That is true, your authors note, life can be moving or stagnant. I loved the simple way you posted deep questions.
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14th Apr 2024 5:53pm
A fantastic poem. Revealing so much as a writer in a few words. Solid!!
14th Apr 2024 6:29pm
