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Standing at the gates of Hell
Your house sits on Mount Hermon.
Drinking blood with me from a wine glass.
Sharing pain and suffering sip after sip.
Becoming one soul in that moment.
Fallen angels breaking free from bondage.
Seeing how far and fast we can fall,
once the chains were removed.
Black wings in a transfiguration.
Displaying the most magnificent sins.
Steeped in sorrow and sadness.
The Watchers, no longer just watching.
So seduced by mortal witches.
Seeing heaven as a prison.
Needing this never-ending strife.
That only a young witch can provide.
'Poisoning' the mind and body in sin.
Her bed is a dark abyss, always calling.
The kiss of an angel laid bare on flesh.
Unlike above, there are no sentinels here
She plays with your halo like a sex toy.
Dark phantasies are created in hell.
New sins created and written in bodily fluids.
Here you can caress your lover's pain.
And all the demons of her mind.
Her spells always involve your essence.
Passion is required, love is optional.
Screams in the night as the spell is cast.
And she becomes your beating heart.
Pentagrams burn in her eyes, inscribed
Her spells filling the angels with desire.
On her knees while bringing you to yours.
Still smiling with you on her lips, taking your hand.
Completing the spell you become condemned
Rhyming heaven and hell, burning verses
Moaning incantations of her pleasure
Joining the witch on this path of pain
We are definitely damned, this is heaven
A witches legs opening the gates to hell
On this left hand path, soul split in two.
Drinking deep of the witches brew.
Flames of passion light the way through...
Her darkness, intense passion, lust, and agony.
Pleasure bringing pain, and pain is more intense.
In the dark love is optional...
Drinking blood with me from a wine glass.
Sharing pain and suffering sip after sip.
Becoming one soul in that moment.
Fallen angels breaking free from bondage.
Seeing how far and fast we can fall,
once the chains were removed.
Black wings in a transfiguration.
Displaying the most magnificent sins.
Steeped in sorrow and sadness.
The Watchers, no longer just watching.
So seduced by mortal witches.
Seeing heaven as a prison.
Needing this never-ending strife.
That only a young witch can provide.
'Poisoning' the mind and body in sin.
Her bed is a dark abyss, always calling.
The kiss of an angel laid bare on flesh.
Unlike above, there are no sentinels here
She plays with your halo like a sex toy.
Dark phantasies are created in hell.
New sins created and written in bodily fluids.
Here you can caress your lover's pain.
And all the demons of her mind.
Her spells always involve your essence.
Passion is required, love is optional.
Screams in the night as the spell is cast.
And she becomes your beating heart.
Pentagrams burn in her eyes, inscribed
Her spells filling the angels with desire.
On her knees while bringing you to yours.
Still smiling with you on her lips, taking your hand.
Completing the spell you become condemned
Rhyming heaven and hell, burning verses
Moaning incantations of her pleasure
Joining the witch on this path of pain
We are definitely damned, this is heaven
A witches legs opening the gates to hell
On this left hand path, soul split in two.
Drinking deep of the witches brew.
Flames of passion light the way through...
Her darkness, intense passion, lust, and agony.
Pleasure bringing pain, and pain is more intense.
In the dark love is optional...
Published 6th Mar 2023
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6th Mar 2023 11:33pm
6th Mar 2023 11:41pm
Dark and loving, that's me. ;) And perhaps awesome too; at least for some anyway. :p Always at the gates of Hell... I don't need to knock, I have access to the VIP entrance always... But still I have so much love and light to share. Thank you for sharing yours with me Ron!
7th Mar 2023 00:21am
Goddammit, you're back !
Do you think it's easy being the star around here?
And you're back with both guns blazing.
Sounds Chamber like to me.
If she's in HELL I'm on the first train out...
BIG FIERY LIKE
RL AWARD
Do you think it's easy being the star around here?
And you're back with both guns blazing.
Sounds Chamber like to me.
If she's in HELL I'm on the first train out...
BIG FIERY LIKE
RL AWARD
7th Mar 2023 00:37am
Always lurking around somewhere… It’s never easy anywhere. :p
But I love you guys so I am here… ;)
Ah yes! Chamber… lock me down and show me…
An angel, a demon…
Always in Hell, you know that.
But perhaps Hell is the only place for me.
Always love the BIG LIKE… and so fiery…
RL AWARD… Love it! Thank you!
But I love you guys so I am here… ;)
Ah yes! Chamber… lock me down and show me…
An angel, a demon…
Always in Hell, you know that.
But perhaps Hell is the only place for me.
Always love the BIG LIKE… and so fiery…
RL AWARD… Love it! Thank you!
7th Mar 2023 00:30am
7th Mar 2023 00:38am
7th Mar 2023 4:29am
Hey K it's good to see you on. I appreciate the way you incorporate mythological elements into the erotic it's kind of a unique signature. Passion and descriptive elements on point.
7th Mar 2023 1:24pm
Thanks Daniel, I just thought I would post something since it had been so long. Time passes so fast when you are slammed with things going on. I love mythology and there is so much we can learn from it and of course I love erotic the most. ;) Without sex I would truly be lost. lol I love that you see the combination of mythology and erotic as a unique signature, that makes me happy! X
7th Mar 2023 1:33pm
Hi,
A blistering Intensity maintained throughout.
I enjoyed "A witches legs opening the gates to hell"
This concept has many dimensions.
Regards
James
A blistering Intensity maintained throughout.
I enjoyed "A witches legs opening the gates to hell"
This concept has many dimensions.
Regards
James
7th Mar 2023 3:11pm
Always intense my dear James. :) Indeed, a witches legs definitely are an opening to the gates of hell and so many other things. I am sure you have been there. lol But yes, so many dimensions waiting to be explored. Needing to be explored deeper... It's always great to see you James, thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me.
7th Mar 2023 4:17pm
“Seeing heaven as a prison!”
My favorite line!
Keeping those wings but transforming them into dark deeds as salacious fallen angels! Wonderful darkness and even if love is optional, lust is a must.
My favorite line!
Keeping those wings but transforming them into dark deeds as salacious fallen angels! Wonderful darkness and even if love is optional, lust is a must.
7th Mar 2023 7:34pm
Heaven has so many rules right? So does being an angel... ;) We need to be bad and sometimes that means standing at or entering the gates of Hell. Even salacious Fallen Angels have wings and dark deeds can be so much more fun! Oh definitely, lust is always a must. Without it, life would truly be boring... X
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8th Mar 2023 4:04pm
Hey Cara, it's always nice to see you! ;) Oh yes! being bad can definitely feel very good. It's good to just let loose and get all of your intense needs met. So happy you found it dark and lovely and thank you for visiting and sharing your thoughts with me. X
8th Mar 2023 8:38pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹⚘⚘⚘⚘absolutely incredible high way to hell under this witch's spell fallen angels 😇 along with, legions of demons 😈 both as they dwell on this path and this rode out the dark threw the abyss and the mist unleashing hell on the world 🌎 for all to embark!! Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖!!!
9th Mar 2023 2:17pm
Hey there RichyRich. So many flowers, I love them all. The highway to hell is paved with the passion and lust of witch's and fallen angels. ;) And legions of demons too. But oh what an incredibly intense journey it is. Always searching and unleashing hell on the world to get those needs met. You know how it is... Dwelling on this path of darkness plunging into the abyss over and over again. Thank you so much for visiting me there and sharing your thoughts. Love it.
10th Mar 2023 4:56pm
Your very very welcome 🙏 Kristina have a great 👍 and wonderful Friday 👏 ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
17th Mar 2023 9:12pm
"Dark phantasies are created in hell.
New sins created and written in bodily fluids.
Here you can caress your lover's pain.
And all the demons of her mind."
Intense from top to bottom, but this stanza stood our for me the most. Indeed dark phantansies do have a hold of some of us in perpetuity, but your lines here not just tantalizing but like a haven imaginations can come into to indulge.
Amazing
New sins created and written in bodily fluids.
Here you can caress your lover's pain.
And all the demons of her mind."
Intense from top to bottom, but this stanza stood our for me the most. Indeed dark phantansies do have a hold of some of us in perpetuity, but your lines here not just tantalizing but like a haven imaginations can come into to indulge.
Amazing
20th Mar 2023 6:24pm
Oh yes! I can be very intense. ;) I am often told that. :p I really love that stanza as well and I am glad you reminded me of it. It feels like forever since I posted this. With things going on in my life, time is passing faster and faster it seems so sadly I have not been around here much. :( We all have dark phantasies I think and they cling to our minds. Some are so tantalizing and the imagination is a beautiful thing. Enacting it is too. ;) I love your thoughts! Thanks Wally.
26th Mar 2023 3:23pm
The darker aspects of love getting darker...
Of course, just like war, romance is on with love getting intricate.
Of course, just like war, romance is on with love getting intricate.
26th Mar 2023 11:58pm
I do know some things about the darker aspects of 'love' and it can be very dark at times. But when you know the darkness the light can be perceived much brighter at times. Romance and love are indeed very intricate and go hand in hand. War too...
29th Mar 2023 3:24pm
