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Making Music
Published 28th Feb 2023
Author's Note
A second poem inspired by the approaching birth of a friend’s first child. I'm almost envious of the purity in her love but could never have lived her life of discipline.
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28th Feb 2023 2:46pm
2nd Mar 2023 1:02am
Enthralled by the beauty of your feminine sensuality and awed by your skill.
2nd Mar 2023 1:04am
I will treasure the phrase, "beauty of your feminine sensuality." You're so sweet! Thank you.
1st Mar 2023 1:15am
2nd Mar 2023 1:04am
1st Mar 2023 6:16am
Like the beautiful mixing of musical metaphors. Favourite phrase - "she carefully placed his tightened bow against her strings". (Felt my own bow tighten just then LOL.)
2nd Mar 2023 1:05am
2nd Mar 2023 6:29am
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2nd Mar 2023 6:11am
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