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Broken strings & dirty things
stillness isn't in my nature
& a body
is a terrible thing to waste
I can't wait to get my hands on you
slick & hard
against my softness
I simply must have you
trembling
at my tender mercies
all finger, no fret
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Painting by Thomas Saliot Saatchi Art
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Re. Broken strings & dirty things
23rd Feb 2023 9:44pm
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23rd Feb 2023 9:47pm
Re. Broken strings & dirty things
23rd Feb 2023 10:19pm
Re: Re. Broken strings & dirty things
23rd Feb 2023 10:21pm
Thanks, a big compliment for someone who tends to talk too much, I appreciate it
Re: Re. Broken strings & dirty things
23rd Feb 2023 11:06pm
Your command of the lingo would command my attention for any duration.
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Re. Broken strings & dirty things
23rd Feb 2023 11:55pm
Love your choice of words - " trembling at my tender mercies". Nicely done!
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Re. Broken strings & dirty things
24th Feb 2023 00:00am
Some wonderful lines here, and the sense of urgency is palpable. Great use of words commanding the essence of a communication.
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Re: Re. Broken strings & dirty things
24th Feb 2023 00:21am
Thanks for the thoughtful comment,
I'm thinking maybe I should
pick up my guitar a little more often...
I'm thinking maybe I should
pick up my guitar a little more often...
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24th Feb 2023 00:26am
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