Tame

It's so simple and yet sometimes I think there's some where it's almost unfathomable to evoke...where they almost seem bereft of the capability to be sympathetic all together! To be a human being and recognize how much of a difference empathy and kindness can actually make to another person can be monumental in even the tiniest of gestures.    
   
I deeply enjoyed the message and your lines are lovely. I think that there's potential to play with the structure/layout, which might make it more poetic feeling.... I'm not a scholar or professional poet, btw, this is only my silly 2cents of an opinion. I take no offense if you take all or none of my feedback and I want to say plainly that this feedback comes with only the best of intentions and hopes that I'm helping, per your request. I adore you and this piece.... so take this critique with that in mind. I don't want hurt feelings or anything misconstrued because this is only a suggestion, dear Debbie!    
    
It's a pleasure...  
🌹💙      
 
An example of what I mean....      
     
The whipping wind      
is a clamorous opposition      
of the soft seducing breeze.    
We are just trying to contain peace    
in our hearts      
in a brutal world.    
Amongst humans hideous actions,    
there are beautiful motiveless gestures.    
Like thorns on a rose,      
The ignorant      
polish their own lives.    
Along the path of apathy,      
can also be found great empathy.    
Can the gentle tame the harsh?      
and then—    
I feel it.    
The delightful breeze prevails.    
The vehemence of the wind fled.    
I walk forth      
     
infected with kindness.

I love the way you laid out the words. That is a great tip, I will cherish going forward. Thank you for your compliments and taking the time to show me that. You are a very special & gifted person......

This is a beautiful poem. I agree with Bluevelvete, changing the structure of the poem gave it a completely different feeling. Great job!

Thank you very much, I agree, I like her changes. Thanks for stopping by and reading. 😊

Smooth flow on this one. Well executed. You rock Deb!!!!!

Thank you 😊