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Star
As
one
with a
name meaning Star, I’ve considered
it something that would be
lovely to live up to.
As I’ve got older,
I’ve come to realise
that there are many ways in which
to shine.
Just be
You
one
with a
name meaning Star, I’ve considered
it something that would be
lovely to live up to.
As I’ve got older,
I’ve come to realise
that there are many ways in which
to shine.
Just be
You
Published 14th Feb 2023
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- Edited 16th Mar 2023 7:45pm
14th Feb 2023 4:32pm
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14th Feb 2023 5:44pm
15th Feb 2023 7:35am
Fantastic structure...
(Concrete poem.?. Learned that from LDF...)
Wonderful message...
Beautiful name...
:)
You know...
In thinking of it...
I worked on a concrete crew as a youth...
I always said I learned to write, doing that job...
Process, structure, sort of...
Getting lost in thought...
I remember the first time I typed a poem into a word processor...
The way you could do sort of...
Make shift, instinctive structures...
(Concrete poem.?. Learned that from LDF...)
Wonderful message...
Beautiful name...
:)
You know...
In thinking of it...
I worked on a concrete crew as a youth...
I always said I learned to write, doing that job...
Process, structure, sort of...
Getting lost in thought...
I remember the first time I typed a poem into a word processor...
The way you could do sort of...
Make shift, instinctive structures...
1st Mar 2023 7:44pm
3rd Mar 2023 11:59pm
Nicely written. Nicely hopeful.
It's been years since we said *Hello* to ourselves.
... 👍
It's been years since we said *Hello* to ourselves.
... 👍
