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Hokkaido Maiden
Hokkaido Maiden
Dawn of the kabuki spirit
Rises like a Hokkaido mist
When cold north winds blow
Across her pale winter complexion
Painted like snow
With lips pink like morning
With the glitter in her eyes
Blue as her birthstone
But often clouded by doubt
And dirty blonde tresses
Soaked in sunshine
Of ancient cherry blossom
Reborn
Dawn of the kabuki spirit
Rises like a Hokkaido mist
When cold north winds blow
Across her pale winter complexion
Painted like snow
With lips pink like morning
With the glitter in her eyes
Blue as her birthstone
But often clouded by doubt
And dirty blonde tresses
Soaked in sunshine
Of ancient cherry blossom
Reborn
Published 12th Feb 2023
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12th Feb 2023 8:44am
12th Feb 2023 1:00pm
Cipher_O,
Love that you felt the energy here my friend. And very happy this captured the essence of the woman. Most grateful for the RL.
John
Love that you felt the energy here my friend. And very happy this captured the essence of the woman. Most grateful for the RL.
John
12th Feb 2023 11:28am
12th Feb 2023 1:02pm
Ljdynamic, love that this left you smitten my friend. Your comment was a dream come true of comments for my writing. And your RL was the cherry on the sundae.
John
John
12th Feb 2023 7:28pm
see you are keeping up your nice spills here been a while since I read any of them keep up the good work
12th Feb 2023 8:23pm
