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Satisfaction Temporarily
The things I want to do to you
They are unholy, blasphemous, driven
You're my Apex of lust
Satisfaction temporarily, then again ..
They are unholy, blasphemous, driven
You're my Apex of lust
Satisfaction temporarily, then again ..
Author's Note
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
The yellow gives caution, the red serves as a warning. The darker color holds a little bit of malice. However, it peaks a curiosity. Your words guide the painting well.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
11th Feb 2023 2:13pm
Good call on the colors LJ.
I’m a Scorpio lust addict.
Should be a warning label on my forehead ….
I’m a Scorpio lust addict.
Should be a warning label on my forehead ….
Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
Anonymous
11th Feb 2023 2:51pm
Shoulda known you are a scorpio. Maybe I did? Lol anyhoo.....I love how you take such a delicate flower and make it dark and beautiful. Yay for new art!!!!!
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11th Feb 2023 3:02pm
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Anonymous
11th Feb 2023 7:05pm
LOL my ex-husband is a Scorpio
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11th Feb 2023 8:09pm
Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
11th Feb 2023 5:18pm
I thought these were flowers until I read the poem. Now I see them as the colors of spectrum waves, high on energy and emotionality.
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Re: Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
11th Feb 2023 5:22pm
They are actually flowers in my weird abstract way but a section of a much larger painting. I think it worked.
I like your take on it too !!
I like your take on it too !!
Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
11th Feb 2023 6:09pm
I see a palm grasping an overwhelmingly vibrant flower reminiscent of holding on to something beautiful knowing that the moment is temporary. There is harmony in your art, visually and emotionally.
Love this.
Love this.
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I always thought I have good balance and asymmetrical ideas in my painting. Never want them completely perfect and as abstract painter you have to learn how to are appreciate non-balance as a thing of beauty.
Thx so much Mary 💓
Thx so much Mary 💓
Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
11th Feb 2023 7:30pm
Then again, and again and again. The never ending story.
Big like.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Big like.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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11th Feb 2023 8:13pm
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11th Feb 2023 8:30pm
You enjoy the naughty things you do with the ladies. You also make sure she's enjoying orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing.
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Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
11th Feb 2023 8:32pm
Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
11th Feb 2023 11:12pm
you don't mess about my friend. You get straight to the point.
Art and verse.
Regards
James
Art and verse.
Regards
James
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Re: Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
11th Feb 2023 11:27pm
I’m not a fancy talker. Or flowery.
I slice and dice and send the bartender back for 2 more.
Appreciate the visit James
I slice and dice and send the bartender back for 2 more.
Appreciate the visit James
Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
12th Feb 2023 2:09am
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12th Feb 2023 2:15am
Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
12th Feb 2023 3:30am
"Fifty shades of red"?
I like your written idea looking like a smashed flower, in the painting.
A splattering of wanton thoughts!
I like your written idea looking like a smashed flower, in the painting.
A splattering of wanton thoughts!
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Re: Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
12th Feb 2023 4:11am
Yeah, I'm a slut
No apologies either
Walk with me on the wild side
LOU REED smiles from beyond..
No apologies either
Walk with me on the wild side
LOU REED smiles from beyond..
Re. Satisfaction Temporarily
12th Feb 2023 4:17am
Could we even handle it if the satisfaction was permanent, I wonder? The wanting is half the fun...
Love that flower.
❤️k
Love that flower.
❤️k
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12th Feb 2023 2:46pm
Agree
You need lust
If it was permanent we'd find fault with it.
I always thought I could eat pizza everyday but alas no ....
💌
You need lust
If it was permanent we'd find fault with it.
I always thought I could eat pizza everyday but alas no ....
💌