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Anonymous
10th Feb 2023 1:14pm
The stripped back nature of this piece almost makes it as intense as the feelings that it communicates.
I really like how the title flows into the piece. There is no clutter. No noise. It just exists. The writer, and the target.
Beautiful short. Thank you.
I really like how the title flows into the piece. There is no clutter. No noise. It just exists. The writer, and the target.
Beautiful short. Thank you.
10th Feb 2023 2:07pm
Thank you Jorge for your comment.
I wasn't sure about what title to use.
And the brevity of my piece I wasn't sure if it would work!
I wasn't sure about what title to use.
And the brevity of my piece I wasn't sure if it would work!
10th Feb 2023 8:53pm
