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Eighth Element
Paint me with wax on my skin,
mirror the sweet pain
melt the candle and shed her tears,
capture me, love me, involuntarily
under my shoulder blades, a hard floor,
in the lower back, in the knees, fear
pass your sentence of love,
leave the cuts on the canvas sheets
in a glass bowl, ice cubes,
next to a hot aromatic wax.
you are waiting for me to exclaim "Yes!"
and silently ask the same question
the wrists are tied with red ribbons,
the pulse tends to untie them
you burst into the eight elements,
leaving a clear imprint on the passions
at the same time burns fire and ice,
pleasure pulls moans from the lips
you put honey on them with your finger,
and you drink the love elixir of my essence
the edge of your dangerous games
is sharpened,
Cut the ribbons, kissing the tracks
you drive hundreds of needles
into the unknown,
dress my red-hot body in sweat
how many shades of ice and wax,
if you mix this explosive mixture ?!
the strip on the skin will tell you about this,
I will multiply this figure with you by six
March on my lips will tell about the secrets
that I want to bring to life
you solve them on a full moon, impudently,
manage to curb my wild agility ...
after frenzied, hot contrasts,
in my thoughts there is a polar silence
breathing the eight elements is dangerous,
scraps of canvas are painted with love ...
mirror the sweet pain
melt the candle and shed her tears,
capture me, love me, involuntarily
under my shoulder blades, a hard floor,
in the lower back, in the knees, fear
pass your sentence of love,
leave the cuts on the canvas sheets
in a glass bowl, ice cubes,
next to a hot aromatic wax.
you are waiting for me to exclaim "Yes!"
and silently ask the same question
the wrists are tied with red ribbons,
the pulse tends to untie them
you burst into the eight elements,
leaving a clear imprint on the passions
at the same time burns fire and ice,
pleasure pulls moans from the lips
you put honey on them with your finger,
and you drink the love elixir of my essence
the edge of your dangerous games
is sharpened,
Cut the ribbons, kissing the tracks
you drive hundreds of needles
into the unknown,
dress my red-hot body in sweat
how many shades of ice and wax,
if you mix this explosive mixture ?!
the strip on the skin will tell you about this,
I will multiply this figure with you by six
March on my lips will tell about the secrets
that I want to bring to life
you solve them on a full moon, impudently,
manage to curb my wild agility ...
after frenzied, hot contrasts,
in my thoughts there is a polar silence
breathing the eight elements is dangerous,
scraps of canvas are painted with love ...
Published 7th Feb 2023
Author's Note
Regarding the Eight elements in Hinduism;
"The first five elements are Earth, Water, Fire, Air and Ether. They correspond to our five physical senses. Ether carries sound and can be heard. Air can be heard and touched. Fire can be heard, touched and seen. Water can be heard, touched, seen and tasted. Earth can be heard, touched, seen, tasted and smelled. The fifth element, Ether, takes us beyond the physical. It links our outer world to our inner world, where the three finer elements are Mind that perceives the world; Wisdom that brings inspiration; and Ego that gives identity. These eight elements combined together are manifestations of the underlying spirit. This spirit is the spark of love within us all that is our original self." (source hinduamerican.org)
"The first five elements are Earth, Water, Fire, Air and Ether. They correspond to our five physical senses. Ether carries sound and can be heard. Air can be heard and touched. Fire can be heard, touched and seen. Water can be heard, touched, seen and tasted. Earth can be heard, touched, seen, tasted and smelled. The fifth element, Ether, takes us beyond the physical. It links our outer world to our inner world, where the three finer elements are Mind that perceives the world; Wisdom that brings inspiration; and Ego that gives identity. These eight elements combined together are manifestations of the underlying spirit. This spirit is the spark of love within us all that is our original self." (source hinduamerican.org)
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7th Feb 2023 11:50pm
the picture made me think of a chocolate covered treat, enjoy the thoughts Kristina
8th Feb 2023 00:34am
I always want to leave you with enjoyable thoughts ABS. ;) Hard to imagine a better chocolate covered treat than that, right? And it always feels really good to be the treat too. :p
8th Feb 2023 00:03am
To be honest, I stopped reading this after your line, 'capture me, love me, involuntarily' because there can be no more a delicious feeling than this! You have summed up love in its purest form in that one sentence, in my view.
8th Feb 2023 1:01pm
Well I do have to admit my heart dropped at first when you said you stopped reading but then I saw the context and I was happy! :p It is such a delicious feeling and I love that you could feel and understand that so well. "You have summed up love in its purest form in that one sentence" That's such an incredible thing to say. Thank you so much! :)
8th Feb 2023 00:32am
Go beautiful such a awesome and sexy read. Another piece smashed out the ground. Another home run for you
Love and light
Ron xx
Love and light
Ron xx
8th Feb 2023 1:11pm
Always want to be awesome and sexy for you Ron. :) Hell yeah! I love smashing it and getting a home run... I really appreciate all the love and light always, it definitely makes me feel good during a tough time. :)
8th Feb 2023 1:30am
I was never good at math, better playing with fire.
Over my head but phenomenal language play and visuals
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Over my head but phenomenal language play and visuals
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8th Feb 2023 1:23pm
Math was always one of my best subjects. :P I always loved Algebra... I was so fast at it that I always did every problem even when we were asked to only do a fraction of that. But still I know all about playing with fire and getting burned as well. But alas, I suppose in the darkness you are always attracted to the fire.
I am so glad you found it phenomenal language play and visuals. If you could see the imagery conveyed then I love that and the Like.
I am so glad you found it phenomenal language play and visuals. If you could see the imagery conveyed then I love that and the Like.
8th Feb 2023 9:21pm
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8th Feb 2023 2:24am
Ms KristinaX, me and you should body paint naked together. Keep on writing my sexy lady.
8th Feb 2023 1:30pm
Ah, body painting can be so beautiful and a very intimate experience. To feel that light touch as it canvases the entire body. Mmmmmm.... yes, it's sad that it must be erased but a new masterpiece can always be created with each new stroke. You reminded me of this one... ;)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/454993-paint-canvases-with-me/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/454993-paint-canvases-with-me/
8th Feb 2023 5:24pm
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8th Feb 2023 4:57am
Sign me up for all eight elements and hit the chakras… full moon, red ribbons, yes the full package.
8th Feb 2023 1:52pm
Oh yes! I will definitely sign you up any day NG. Let's explore all eight elements and hitting on all the chakras, acupuncture and pressure points, opening up completely is the most amazing feeling. ;p And yes, the full moon, red ribbons, and everything else is certainly part of that journey inside and outside as well isn't it? ;)
8th Feb 2023 11:38am
8th Feb 2023 5:13pm
Oh yes! always love expanding the mind and all the things that can do to the body as well. ;) Such intense desires and I am so happy you could feel that, especially when it's super hot. ;) You are super hot Mary and I always love it when you stop by to share with me.
8th Feb 2023 1:00pm
Breathtaking ink. Sexy and spiritual in a way. I bet you would give a hell of a reading.
Wonderful as always, friend 😁
Wonderful as always, friend 😁
8th Feb 2023 5:28pm
Ooooo, I love breathtaking. ;) Sexy is always the best and I really love that you saw the spiritual aspects as well, it is definitely spiritual too. ;) Thanks so much for the vote of confidence on a reading; that makes me feel pretty good and so glad you think it's wonderful DC. What a wonderful comment. ;)
Your power grows with each moment in time, as if time itself were at your command to delay sensations of pain until the mind is released into an elemental maze of being. Sex becomes transformation, and transformation becomes self realizing orgasm. Love is all encompassing and reaches new heights of enlightenment as the body is again transformed into a tuning fork of pain vibrating with the scars hidden in your soul. And lo! the world is changed forever, deaf and blind to all but the touch upon your lips that ignites fire in your loins and burns flaming along your spine to your third eye, exploding in madness, turning the world inside out as you're entered through the mind eye, thrusting deep into the consciousness of love. Your power grows until there is no love, there is no lust, no pain or pleasure, just a single quivering nerve vibrating with desire. .... This is deeper than anything you've written before, and if I were awed before as you opened my eyes, this poem will transform and alter those who dare to follow you. You hold so much power.
9th Feb 2023 5:48pm
You are a true shaman, so good at divining deeper meanings. And I love this power that you see in me. Ah, I do love to stop time - building the most intense and incredible sensations and the absolute insane need to reach the climax while already being stuck in a continuous one. Just the lightest touch or even a breath ready to cause a volcanic eruption. Sex is a source of transformation and the orgasm primes those feelings that inspire a constant passion for life. Love is an interesting concept, one that defies reason and yet somehow we always know. I saw transformed into a tuning fork (rather than turning), I certainly know what it's like to feel like a tuning fork of pain vibrating with the scars. I adore the touch upon my lips and that definitely ignites fire in my loins and burns along the spine. It is my madness, and it is what keeps me appearing sane as well. Turning the world inside out seems to be my purpose as it thrusts deep into my consciousness. I don't know if it's love but it's me. Lust, pain, pleasure, and desire sums things up nicely. A single quivering nerve in the midst of a violent storm. I love that you were able to connect with me through this writing and see it's depth. You leave me speechless...
9th Feb 2023 3:18am
“capture me, love me, involuntarily” – Involuntarily had me going in two different directions, (1) you being taken against your will, or (2) the captor has no choice only to love you.
Since there are seven pure diatomic elements (can bond with themselves) and you mention an 8th – Meaning you are seeking to bond with your inner self in your “purest” form. But more likely you are referring to Sternberg's Triangular Theory and the 8 Types of Love . Per Sternberg, the three components of love in the triangular theory of love are intimacy, passion, and decision/commitment.
The three components of love combine in a variety of ways to create eight kinds of love: nonlove, liking, infatuated love, empty love, romantic love, companionate love, fatuous love, and consummate love (Sternberg, 1986).
The “yes” a form of begging. The burns and marks on your canvas (body). The untied ribbons, although physically bound the bdsm is liberating. The fire and ice, although quite in contrast, pushes you to the edge where they extract the same passionate response.
Yes, the 8th element is unstable, thus risky, requiring special handling, but six O’s per application may be worth the risk.
Since there are seven pure diatomic elements (can bond with themselves) and you mention an 8th – Meaning you are seeking to bond with your inner self in your “purest” form. But more likely you are referring to Sternberg's Triangular Theory and the 8 Types of Love . Per Sternberg, the three components of love in the triangular theory of love are intimacy, passion, and decision/commitment.
The three components of love combine in a variety of ways to create eight kinds of love: nonlove, liking, infatuated love, empty love, romantic love, companionate love, fatuous love, and consummate love (Sternberg, 1986).
The “yes” a form of begging. The burns and marks on your canvas (body). The untied ribbons, although physically bound the bdsm is liberating. The fire and ice, although quite in contrast, pushes you to the edge where they extract the same passionate response.
Yes, the 8th element is unstable, thus risky, requiring special handling, but six O’s per application may be worth the risk.
9th Feb 2023 7:38pm
And so you have read it correctly since I considered both directions. In addition, being taken against your will can be interpreted in more than one way. Such as you cannot fight it within yourself despite your will.
You do have a way of reaching in deep and truly exploring the meaning of things DaVinci. The elements do bond with one another... I think the inner self represents the 8th element well. Sternberg's Triangular Theory is very interesting. I love the different combinations and that definitely makes sense. I will have to look into Sternberg some more... I really appreciate you sharing that with me a lot.
When you have such intense needs I suppose you can find yourself begging. ;) The burns and marks can make such a beautiful painting. And yes the untied ribbons is a reflection on the liberating effect of bdsm. It's definitely liberating for me... For someone who always needs to be responsible that lack of control is so amazing. Fire and ice is quite the contrast and I absolutely love the extremes. I miss going to a European style spa with a arctic cold plunge, ice room, sauna, steam room, and thermal springs. ;) Going back and forth between the freezing and the very hot.
the 8th element is unstable, oh no doubt! Very risky and always requires special handling. As many O's per application as you can handle and it's definitely worth the risk. ;)
You do have a way of reaching in deep and truly exploring the meaning of things DaVinci. The elements do bond with one another... I think the inner self represents the 8th element well. Sternberg's Triangular Theory is very interesting. I love the different combinations and that definitely makes sense. I will have to look into Sternberg some more... I really appreciate you sharing that with me a lot.
When you have such intense needs I suppose you can find yourself begging. ;) The burns and marks can make such a beautiful painting. And yes the untied ribbons is a reflection on the liberating effect of bdsm. It's definitely liberating for me... For someone who always needs to be responsible that lack of control is so amazing. Fire and ice is quite the contrast and I absolutely love the extremes. I miss going to a European style spa with a arctic cold plunge, ice room, sauna, steam room, and thermal springs. ;) Going back and forth between the freezing and the very hot.
the 8th element is unstable, oh no doubt! Very risky and always requires special handling. As many O's per application as you can handle and it's definitely worth the risk. ;)
9th Feb 2023 3:27am
I love the thoughtful crafting and use of the elements in this in particular. Structured and spiritual can lend such presence to the unfolding.
9th Feb 2023 6:41pm
I do love exploring all of the elements of being. Each has so much we can learn and so much we can feel. And I am really glad that you liked the crafting and exploration of them Daniel. Life is a very spiritual journey. Your writing is very spiritual in so many ways so I am really glad that you read and liked this one. Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me.
Anonymous
9th Feb 2023 4:46pm
Oommmph... Hot chocolatey image n sensual writing for chocolate day...
9th Feb 2023 6:30pm
Hey beautiful girl, I thought it was a great hot chocolately image. I know it got me all worked up. I had not really thought about Valentine's day but it is right around the corner isn't it; time is flying... Flowers, chocolate, red wine, and lots of sex is always a great way to go. ;) It's always great to see you olivia, thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. :)
Anonymous
10th Feb 2023 4:16am
hey darlin!! I loved this post of yours, even though you didn't think of valentine but I connected it with chocolate day, n yaaay lot of sex, roses, chocolates, nuts n definitely rose wine ..aaaah together all stuffs, then the fun of Valentine's will be amazing.. .welll keep writing like this..love you...
10th Feb 2023 11:50am
10th Feb 2023 12:44pm
Do I? ;) Well I suppose who doesn't have love on their mind in one way or another... Also Valentine's Day is right around the corner too. :p Kind of feel like doing fondue... with chocolate fondue for desert of course. ;) Love the Cosmic BIG LIKE. Showing your spiritual side I see. :p
10th Feb 2023 1:27pm
The flame flickers in the window as all her thoughts are undressed. To be curbed would cure more than the customary faint of heart...hold dear to those fantasies begging to be fulfilled
10th Feb 2023 2:58pm
Ah, her thoughts go so deep and are so very erotic. Her thoughts undressed with definitely be something truly shocking. To be curbed would definitely not be for the faint of heart. I will always hold on to those fantasies and let them multiply begging to be fulfilled... I can imagine you have many fantasies begging to be fulfilled also Tim. ;) Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts.
12th Feb 2023 1:02am
Oh Kristina, that was sensational. I like how you convey the opposites of hot and cold...
"how many shades of ice and wax,
if you mix this explosive mixture ?!"
You really weave a great thread of both spirituality and sexuality in the context that brings the readers to take note in discovering certain peccadillos that for some are just awesome treats of pleasure.
Well done.
"how many shades of ice and wax,
if you mix this explosive mixture ?!"
You really weave a great thread of both spirituality and sexuality in the context that brings the readers to take note in discovering certain peccadillos that for some are just awesome treats of pleasure.
Well done.
13th Feb 2023 10:41pm
You are sensational Wally and what a breathtaking comment. I love the opposites... I love European spas where you have the cold plunge, ice room, sauna, and steam room. I love going back and forth from the HOT to freezing... And I love the feeling of wax burning on the skin or ice freezing... Such an explosive mix, like me... ;) Spirituality and sexuality definitely go together. Peccadillos is such a phenomenal word. And yes such awesome treats of pleasure... Extremes are just so thrilling...
12th Feb 2023 11:50am
"pleasure pulls moans from the lips".. hell of a line.
The entire piece is a beautiful desire.
LJ
The entire piece is a beautiful desire.
LJ
13th Feb 2023 10:49pm
Pleasure definitely pulls moans from the lips doesn't it? ;) I am so happy you like that line and the entire piece Lj. What would life be like without our intense desires and passion, I can't imagine it... Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts with me. It's always so great to see you!
13th Feb 2023 11:33pm
You get away with so much.
Obtuse longing for proclivities outside the realm of modern sexuality. I believe we must conduct a session in Chamber 106. Our new wing. Hot wax on tap. You can thank me later with the Purple …..
Obtuse longing for proclivities outside the realm of modern sexuality. I believe we must conduct a session in Chamber 106. Our new wing. Hot wax on tap. You can thank me later with the Purple …..
13th Feb 2023 11:41pm
Haha, you aren't supposed to say anything about that damnit! I have gotten out of so much stuff. lol nevermind... forget I said that... Ah, my proclivities; now that's another subject altogether. Chamber 106, remind me what that one has in it... ;) Oh yes! totally new... Perhaps I haven't been to that one just yet. But I do love hot wax. The purple huh? That has so many possible meanings...
13th Feb 2023 11:46pm
Yes, you are very aware of the dark purple.
Don’t play coy
Valentines Day tomorrow and all ….😈
Don’t play coy
Valentines Day tomorrow and all ….😈
13th Feb 2023 11:53pm
Haha, yes I do know the dark purple very well... and oh God, it is Valentine's day tomorrow... ;)
14th Feb 2023 3:39am
I like that if I need to cut back on the sugar content, I can flip her on her other side...
Not that I ever turn down sweets.
As she lays now, I'm imagining her chocolate covered "cavities".
You write smart sex. As in you don't exclude your mind, it's an integral part of what makes you burn hotter. I'm sure you have your moments of reckless abandon! Lol.
But, you use every part of yourself, including a mental connection, when you're attaching with someone. I hope they pay attention to that aspect of you, too.
Your write is full of energetic consumption using all your senses. It's awesome.
Not that I ever turn down sweets.
As she lays now, I'm imagining her chocolate covered "cavities".
You write smart sex. As in you don't exclude your mind, it's an integral part of what makes you burn hotter. I'm sure you have your moments of reckless abandon! Lol.
But, you use every part of yourself, including a mental connection, when you're attaching with someone. I hope they pay attention to that aspect of you, too.
Your write is full of energetic consumption using all your senses. It's awesome.
15th Feb 2023 1:49pm
Haha, definitely cut back on the sugar... It's very acidic and bad for you. And after all I am sweet enough and so are you. :p
Yeah, I know you have a sweet tooth but there are other things you can bite into.
Definitely, and it's so fun finding those cavities among the very dark and 'bitter' chocolate... (you know very little sugar)
I love smart sex... ;) When the mind is engaged you can truly feel so much more. It absolutely makes you burn the hottest... And oh yeah, lot's of moments of reckless abandon. lol It's what keeps me together. :p
I use every part of myself in everything I would say. I am actually very sensitive. :) But mental, physical, spiritual... all parts... and all intense. Sometimes people can't help but pay attention. :p
I love to engage all of the senses... To feel everything in every way. The hot, the cold, the pleasure, the pain, ... I love that you think it's awesome Styx. It's always so great to see you and I really appreciate you sharing with me.
Yeah, I know you have a sweet tooth but there are other things you can bite into.
Definitely, and it's so fun finding those cavities among the very dark and 'bitter' chocolate... (you know very little sugar)
I love smart sex... ;) When the mind is engaged you can truly feel so much more. It absolutely makes you burn the hottest... And oh yeah, lot's of moments of reckless abandon. lol It's what keeps me together. :p
I use every part of myself in everything I would say. I am actually very sensitive. :) But mental, physical, spiritual... all parts... and all intense. Sometimes people can't help but pay attention. :p
I love to engage all of the senses... To feel everything in every way. The hot, the cold, the pleasure, the pain, ... I love that you think it's awesome Styx. It's always so great to see you and I really appreciate you sharing with me.
19th Feb 2023 11:47pm
Many shades of wax when counting life's mysteries using dark shadows to dip in the wax.
20th Feb 2023 00:17am
So many shades... Always counting life's mysteries, so many of which exist in the dark shadows. And I love it when the hot wax drips on my skin and it lights up every nerve, that incredible burning sensation and then it cools so quickly. The feeling of the wax hardening, pulling at my skin. It's really something. It's great to see you Adagio, wishing you all the best in the new year.
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3rd Apr 2023 11:56pm
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5th Apr 2023 9:10pm
The absolute best things to explore are love and desire right? ;) I am so happy that the imagery pulled you into the sensual and raw passion, and the intensity...
I love the extremes of wax, ice, fire, and honey. Pushing the senses to the limits of contrast and complexity. Dangerous games are so thrilling, and what would life be like without risks.
I love your interpretation and description of "scraps of canvas..." That is the perfect way to express the meaning of it.
I do love the raw passionate intensity of love. Intimacy is so important to me, I need that touch... to feel things inside so deeply penetrating... I am glad I could draw you in with me. Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your wonderful thoughts with me.
I love the extremes of wax, ice, fire, and honey. Pushing the senses to the limits of contrast and complexity. Dangerous games are so thrilling, and what would life be like without risks.
I love your interpretation and description of "scraps of canvas..." That is the perfect way to express the meaning of it.
I do love the raw passionate intensity of love. Intimacy is so important to me, I need that touch... to feel things inside so deeply penetrating... I am glad I could draw you in with me. Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your wonderful thoughts with me.
