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Corporeal
What's happening to me?
Everything's quiet, empty
It's just my thoughts, me
Bathed in a pool of black
I hear my heart beat
My lungs expanding
Am I dead?
Unconscious perhaps?
I've done it
I am one with myself
In body
And in soul
So this is what peace feels like
To be enlightened
So free
Oh so free
Everything's quiet, empty
It's just my thoughts, me
Bathed in a pool of black
I hear my heart beat
My lungs expanding
Am I dead?
Unconscious perhaps?
I've done it
I am one with myself
In body
And in soul
So this is what peace feels like
To be enlightened
So free
Oh so free
Published 22nd Jan 2023
| Edited 26th Jan 2023
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22nd Aug 2023 12:42pm
This reads like a dark experience where perhaps in times of despair one leaves the body or just the mindset.
Your words are well crafted, could be a good piece to make into a more lengthy story too but fine as it is!
A\R
Your words are well crafted, could be a good piece to make into a more lengthy story too but fine as it is!
A\R
