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yup
i came
out
of the closet
and into
his rear
(about as deep as most of the "erotic" i find here)
out
of the closet
and into
his rear
(about as deep as most of the "erotic" i find here)
Published 5th Apr 2012
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5th Apr 2012 9:45pm
nice poem,
very weird,
it was nice i came up with the idea,
to bad i couldnt have wrote it bc it would have been 10 x better. ! lollll , allreaddddy thenn this comments getting wayy ttooo longgg,
later.!
very weird,
it was nice i came up with the idea,
to bad i couldnt have wrote it bc it would have been 10 x better. ! lollll , allreaddddy thenn this comments getting wayy ttooo longgg,
later.!
6th Apr 2012 2:02am
6th Apr 2012 4:18am
6th Apr 2012 4:57am
6th Apr 2012 5:02am
they get the most reads..and some writers are quite witty..like this poem short and sweet and some one got it in the end.. peace Crim :)
6th Apr 2012 5:12am
ha-now thats funny!... i knew they get the most reads so i was curious to post with the worst poem i could think of...and i have no doubt that many could be quite witty- but the majority ive seen are crap and hardly what i would call erotic...its a shame that so many brilliant poems on here wont get 60 reads ever...oh well
6th Apr 2012 10:02am
Write anything, post it in erotic and watch the reads grow haha. Must admit, it's better than most erotic scribbles here.
6th Apr 2012 1:13pm
6th Apr 2012 8:30pm
and at 114 reads just absurd....and what really gets me is that u see the whole thing befor you click on it...114 people thought jeez id really like to read more
12th Dec 2015 10:55pm
