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Little Linda
No one knew
so no one came.
Someone left flowers on her grave.
She died
how she lived,
in secret.
so no one came.
Someone left flowers on her grave.
She died
how she lived,
in secret.
Author's Note
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I used AI and photoshop.
My second cousin Little Linda died on the 17th. She had a hard, hard life.
I used AI and photoshop.
My second cousin Little Linda died on the 17th. She had a hard, hard life.
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Re. Little Linda
22nd Jan 2023 00:21am
Re. Little Linda
22nd Jan 2023 2:59am
Really raw and stark, poignant in it's brevity. Condolences for your loss. 💖🙏🏻
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Re. Little Linda
22nd Jan 2023 5:31am
Re: Re. Little Linda
22nd Jan 2023 1:31pm
Lol knowing Linda she'd probably be pissed because I'm telling her business lol we weren't super close but it disent make her death any less tragic.
Re. Little Linda
So much said, in such powerfully Chosen syllables. Very powerful. God rest her soul.
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Re. Little Linda
22nd Jan 2023 4:58pm
This triggers a deep and sad thought about someone I love. You have written a complex piece about a simple subject, and it feels very relatable
My condolences.
My condolences.
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Re: Re. Little Linda
22nd Jan 2023 5:07pm
Re. Little Linda
22nd Jan 2023 6:19pm
That should never happen. What a shitty world we live in. Sorry for your loss. Robert.
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Re: Re. Little Linda
22nd Jan 2023 6:27pm
I probably sound heartless but that's how she liked to do things, alone. Even in death.
She had a tragic life and honestly I'm glad it's over for her. She can be at peace now.
She had a tragic life and honestly I'm glad it's over for her. She can be at peace now.
Re. Little Linda
29th Jan 2023 8:08am
Gathering from those lines, it tells alot about people who keep to themselves or are very private that even in death those who may be close (or thought they were close) had no clue. You really have a gift for throwing us these pieces with thought provoking perspectives.
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Re: Re. Little Linda
29th Jan 2023 3:16pm
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Re: Re. Little Linda
4th Apr 2023 3:55pm
Thabk you for the excellent comment. I appreciate the critique. Thank you for seeing so much in so little.
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