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Re. Elusive
20th Jan 2023 2:52am
Re: Re. Elusive
20th Jan 2023 12:51pm
You know it. 🍒 Red is best.
Sometimes I just have to throw a few words out there to show that I'm still here.
❤️k
Sometimes I just have to throw a few words out there to show that I'm still here.
❤️k
Re. Elusive
20th Jan 2023 3:21am
Re: Re. Elusive
20th Jan 2023 12:52pm
I do love making every syllable work as hard as it can. Thanks for reading, and the RL!
❤️k
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Re. Elusive
20th Jan 2023 5:19am
Re: Re. Elusive
20th Jan 2023 12:54pm
Thank you! There's a "TimeHeals" tag, but nothing for "TimeKillsPoetry". There are so many things I want to write, and so little time to sit and do it...
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Re. Elusive
Anonymous
20th Jan 2023 4:14pm
This felt like a paradox on top of a paradox
A beautiful struggle indeed
Thx for the reminder
Naaj
A beautiful struggle indeed
Thx for the reminder
Naaj
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Re: Re. Elusive
20th Jan 2023 7:04pm
Thanks for stopping by to leave your wordprints! I wish I had more substantive poetry to offer, but at the moment it's all stuck in my head...
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❤️k
Re. Elusive
Dear K,
We do our best and when it’s not you go hiking and I go shopping. All’s right with the world again. The good thing, when I can tolerate it, is frustration is impermanent. You’ve made every word count and that’s talent in a restricted syllable count!! I’m too chatty. 🤫
Great write!!xx H🌷
We do our best and when it’s not you go hiking and I go shopping. All’s right with the world again. The good thing, when I can tolerate it, is frustration is impermanent. You’ve made every word count and that’s talent in a restricted syllable count!! I’m too chatty. 🤫
Great write!!xx H🌷
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Re: Re. Elusive
21st Jan 2023 1:08am
Dear H,
You're never too chatty! Love to hear what you think, even if it's about shoe shopping, which I detest. Thanks for stopping by to show some love to my meagre 17 syllables!
❤k
You're never too chatty! Love to hear what you think, even if it's about shoe shopping, which I detest. Thanks for stopping by to show some love to my meagre 17 syllables!
❤k
Re. Elusive
17th Feb 2023 4:41pm
Or just like catching a fish, one has to have a good grasp of the poem.
Thought provoking write in all it's brevity.
Thought provoking write in all it's brevity.
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Re: Re. Elusive
19th Feb 2023 4:13am