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Dessert
The sight of your glorious body laying bare before me
The scent of your Jasmin Noir perfume teasing my nose
A bowl waits by your side filled with chocolate cream
I lick my lips in anticipation and pick up my paintbrush.
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I dip the brush in and begin the first stroke
Your honey eyes study the relaxed motions of my hand
I lead the thin brush over your perked nipples and perfectly mounded breasts
Your pupils dilate and sweat forms on your mocha skin.
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Yet even the sinful chocolate can’t compare
To the sweetness of your mouth-watering cream
I take a taste; your breath hitches
And my tongue goes numb as the tastebuds overload.
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Rich caramel intoxicates me
This is the sweetest of desserts that I’ve ever had
I can barely get over the initial shockwave of pleasure
But we have all night; another taste wouldn’t hurt.
The scent of your Jasmin Noir perfume teasing my nose
A bowl waits by your side filled with chocolate cream
I lick my lips in anticipation and pick up my paintbrush.
-
I dip the brush in and begin the first stroke
Your honey eyes study the relaxed motions of my hand
I lead the thin brush over your perked nipples and perfectly mounded breasts
Your pupils dilate and sweat forms on your mocha skin.
-
Yet even the sinful chocolate can’t compare
To the sweetness of your mouth-watering cream
I take a taste; your breath hitches
And my tongue goes numb as the tastebuds overload.
-
Rich caramel intoxicates me
This is the sweetest of desserts that I’ve ever had
I can barely get over the initial shockwave of pleasure
But we have all night; another taste wouldn’t hurt.
Written by
LunasChild8
Published 6th Jan 2023
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Re. Dessert
6th Jan 2023 3:28pm
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Dear, Luna
You employ such intoxicating imagery in this beautifully written, romantic piece.
You employ such intoxicating imagery in this beautifully written, romantic piece.
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7th Jan 2023 2:21am
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7th Jan 2023 2:22am
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7th Jan 2023 6:50am
Hoi hoi
….. your breath hitches
No small but beautiful details are missed in this tale.
I really hope it’ll last forever.
Great write!
Kind regards, Gus
….. your breath hitches
No small but beautiful details are missed in this tale.
I really hope it’ll last forever.
Great write!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re. Dessert
30th Jan 2023 1:40am
LunasChild8, the subtle nuances in your lyrical sensuality are a delight to my erotic sensibility and mind. Each play of imagery and sensory detail is given superb attention as the characters in your poem make love so beautifully that I can't help but see them through my mind's eye as vividly as though I were there.
John
John
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Re: Re. Dessert
30th Jan 2023 1:43am
Thanks for your insightful comment, John, and for adding my poem to your reading list. You're a natural in the erotic genre, and I've enjoyed all of your poems that I've read so far.
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26th Apr 2023 3:10pm