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Creampie
And he asked what's your favorite desert?
I did not need to think for even a second.
It's a creampie I said.
And so I asked...
Would you like to make one with me?
I did not need to think for even a second.
It's a creampie I said.
And so I asked...
Would you like to make one with me?
Author's Note
Happy New Year! I hope everyone had some pie. ;)
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Re. Creampie
2nd Jan 2023 00:39am
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2nd Jan 2023 2:34am
What would life be like without desert? Not just sweet but very hot and ready to take it all in so deep. ;) You will always want seconds and thirds and ... You know I will too because I love being desert... Happy New Year! ;)
Re. Creampie
2nd Jan 2023 00:50am
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2nd Jan 2023 2:36am
Well I am glad you answered the question for me. ;) And absolutely is the best answer. I must admit I do love key lime pie as well. The more tart the better. The kind that just makes my mouth pucker up, ready to take whatever is to come. Happy New Year Ron!
Re. Creampie
2nd Jan 2023 7:50am
Haha, well you know it's my favorite 😁
Always room for pie.
Great ink with absolutely no sexual innuendo at all, hehe
Always room for pie.
Great ink with absolutely no sexual innuendo at all, hehe
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2nd Jan 2023 9:52pm
Of course I know it's your favorite. I know everything damnit. lol And there is always room for a creampie, I mean pie. * nevermind, innocent look * You know exactly what I mean. ;) Absolutely no sexual innuendo, haha. ummm no comment. ;)
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5th Feb 2024 9:40pm
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2nd Jan 2023 9:52pm
Always xtra cream, extra thick cream too, and even clotted cream. Organic of course. And of course I know what you like DaVinci. All geniuses need a constant source of inspiration. And what better to inspire than a creampie. lol
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2nd Jan 2023 1:20pm
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2nd Jan 2023 9:54pm
You are always so poetic MS. That's just beautiful. I could definitely see the aqueous moonstone opalescence that you spread with your words. ;) And yes, absolutely nothing says I care better than a creampie. And it shows you that she really cares too. Well that, and she has needs damnit! But she cares about something. lol Also, it's an anti-depressant. (yes there was a study about that. lol)
Re. Creampie
Hell yes I would have seconds. You would be hot in a whipped cream bikini. Keep on writing.
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3rd Jan 2023 5:04pm
No doubt you would have it ALL Francisco. Wouldn't have it any other way right... ;) Ah the whipped cream bikini is so sensual to it off. The only way is with an eager tongue. Mmmmmm.... That's the best, making sure every last drop is removed and then sinking in so deep afterword. Damn, that really gets me worked up. lol
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4th Jan 2023 2:57am
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9th Jan 2023 4:23pm
👏 👏 👏!! Short sweet and very very direct!! Cream pie 🥧 my favorite 😋!! Please keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏 ❤ 💖
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9th Jan 2023 8:57pm
Short sweet and very very direct... that's me. lol ;) Well not that short but I bet you are tall. ;) Definitely taller than me but I like high heels. Cream pie should be everyone's favorite. Just saying, what's not to love... exciting, creamy, and so much more. The best anti-depressant there is. ;)
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9th Jan 2023 9:20pm
Absolutely I agree 👍 cream pie is the best solution 😋 if you ask me queen!! Yes I'm 👍 tall dark chocolate 🍫 and handsome think 🤔 you can handle 😉 it queen!! Peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
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31st Mar 2023 10:45pm
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3rd Apr 2023 2:42pm
Really glad you liked it MP. I find that everyone wants to make one. ;) No doubt they are really popular and taste so good. lol Thanks for the hug and love. I really appreciate you coming by.
Re. Creampie
11th Apr 2023 11:24pm
I quite like lemon meringue tart. It sort of resembles a cream pie, you dirty dog! 😋🤣
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12th Apr 2023 00:17am
Hey, I like lemon meringue pie/tart too. I saw one at the store that looked divine but I convinced myself not to get it. I will get my creampies and calories in other ways. lol And I LOVE a good key lime pie. Do you even have key lime pies over there?, I don't remember any but they are luscious. I love them as tart as possible. And yes a dirty dog for sure, I can't help it. lol
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I had to Google it but a tart has no pastry on top, whereas a pie does. I was once called a 'tart' myself at work. For a male, that's quite endearing. It's sad still however that in society, if a man sleeps around, he is considered a stud whereas a woman is considered a tart. I have never understood this & would happily shack up with a woman who sleeps around... because I am a tart! 🤣
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Re. Creampie
12th Apr 2023 00:19am
you on the down low Mike??? Gabe I see you guys wow.....legion I will force your hand.d
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Re. Creampie
12th Apr 2023 00:20am
tommy hawkin on heaven's door nah I altered the dimension think I don't know you boo???:////
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12th Apr 2023 00:21am
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12th Apr 2023 00:31am
trick me out of my math ai.... no thank you I don't divide and conquer my own soul really guys space out.
great math...
great math...
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Re. Creampie
28th Apr 2023 5:57pm
Very hot and cleverly written... I can see this one both ways. Have a wonderful weekend
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9th May 2023 4:56pm
Hey Magic.. I love keeping things very hot! I have needs... I like that you can see it both ways... Who doesn't love a creampie? ;) Sorry for the long delay in answering... It's been a hectic year. I hope you had an amazing weekend and a great start to the week.
Re. Creampie
3rd Feb 2024 8:12pm
What a question! "Would you like to make a creampie with me?"
So slutty!
I love all your poems and so want to read more
Richard
So slutty!
I love all your poems and so want to read more
Richard
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5th Feb 2024 9:11pm
Sometimes you just have to ask, but slutty questions are the best aren't they? lol I adore that you love all my poems and you want to read more, that makes me happy. Thanks Richard. ;)
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5th Feb 2024 9:41pm
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5th Feb 2024 11:20pm
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7th Feb 2024 3:16pm
Haha... always get a large piece and multiple servings as well. ;) Thanks for the hugs and love Oral! I always love that.
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19th Apr 2024 2:05pm
I like it nasty and i like it nice
Because in your sweet hole I would creampie it twice,
So you can enjoy every moment with a pleasurable grin
While I masturbate afterwards watching you piss out my sin.
Because in your sweet hole I would creampie it twice,
So you can enjoy every moment with a pleasurable grin
While I masturbate afterwards watching you piss out my sin.
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19th Apr 2024 8:33pm
The nastier the better. ;) But I like it nice too...
Now that's what I like to hear and save some for in the mouth too, it is an antidepressant for women you know (yes, there was a real study on that, probably done by men but I definitely believe it lol)
A grin, screams, crying out, moans, and everything else too.
Oh but don't waste it... :p
Now that's what I like to hear and save some for in the mouth too, it is an antidepressant for women you know (yes, there was a real study on that, probably done by men but I definitely believe it lol)
A grin, screams, crying out, moans, and everything else too.
Oh but don't waste it... :p