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Stranger
She said:
‘Hey, stranger.’
And I turned,
Caught off guard;
Saw her,
And for a brief moment,
The valley of my regret
Bloomed with
Beautiful memory.
‘Hey, stranger.’
And I turned,
Caught off guard;
Saw her,
And for a brief moment,
The valley of my regret
Bloomed with
Beautiful memory.
Published 1st Jan 2023
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Did I post this already? I never know anymore
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1st Jan 2023 5:27am
Dear tmw,
Not sure if you posted this before but it’s a poem of great relatability. Closing stanza sums up the randomness of the incidental meeting and your reader can feel the pit of regret.
Great write. H🌷
Not sure if you posted this before but it’s a poem of great relatability. Closing stanza sums up the randomness of the incidental meeting and your reader can feel the pit of regret.
Great write. H🌷
5th Jan 2023 3:36pm
4th Mar 2023 2:22am
There is a great presence of feeling in this succinctly painted scene.
