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🌧💔I will Trade Tears for Rain anyday💔🌧
I will trade tears for
rain anyday,
I didn't want to be
with you anyway.
since, you decided to
go far away,
I can't deal with this
heartbreak for another day.
although, I am miserable and
feeling down,
because, of you no
Longer being Around!!
I can't continue to feel this way
I would rather trade tears
for a Rainy Day!!!
B.R.
rain anyday,
I didn't want to be
with you anyway.
since, you decided to
go far away,
I can't deal with this
heartbreak for another day.
although, I am miserable and
feeling down,
because, of you no
Longer being Around!!
I can't continue to feel this way
I would rather trade tears
for a Rainy Day!!!
B.R.
Published 30th Dec 2022
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30th Dec 2022 10:39pm
31st Dec 2022 4:47am
6th Jan 2023 4:53pm
Definitely love the gist and Feel of this spill
i. too. would have opt'd for tears over rain when my Daughter died!!
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Your spill here has nice rhyming but could be tweaked to be better in tempo but Your msg is well rec'd concise and on point.
(my honest critique that You requested)
i. too. would have opt'd for tears over rain when my Daughter died!!
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Your spill here has nice rhyming but could be tweaked to be better in tempo but Your msg is well rec'd concise and on point.
(my honest critique that You requested)
8th Jan 2023 3:48am
