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The Greatest Feeling....

It's hard to live without love,
Without someone to be there for you as a friend,
As a listener,
As an understanding person,
But most of all a lover.
You feel so much better when,
There is someone to take care of you,
Someone you can give it back to.
Love is so strong,
It's hard to get rid of,
It just sucks you in and you cannot get out,
A force so strong,
Sometimes gentle,
Sometimes rough.
The worst feeling is when you thought,
Someone loved you back,
But it was all a lie.
The love you gave,
And thought you got it back,
But you never did,
You never gained.
For some it's hard to find,
For some it's as easy as that,
It is the greatest feeling you can find,
So enjoy it to the last,
Don't take advantage of it,
'Cuz it might be your last.
Love and be loved,
Be faithful but strict,
Don't let your love go,
If you know they're great....
Written by dee_amethyst (pho3nix 999)
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