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Bliss
He was the oldest ever, but I found
He had all the experience and guile
To take me as he wanted and to pound
His way to expressed pleasure. Every wile
In his unwritten book was brought to play,
And, if I was a toy in this quiet game
He won. The execution of his stay
Was achieved with each climax and intent
To make me come again. A dizzy spell
Was, hardly, a deterrent, for he surged
And laid me at his mercy. I could tell
He wanted me so much until he'd purged
All trace of innocence. He made me his:
My boldest lover ever and my bliss.
He had all the experience and guile
To take me as he wanted and to pound
His way to expressed pleasure. Every wile
In his unwritten book was brought to play,
And, if I was a toy in this quiet game
He won. The execution of his stay
Was achieved with each climax and intent
To make me come again. A dizzy spell
Was, hardly, a deterrent, for he surged
And laid me at his mercy. I could tell
He wanted me so much until he'd purged
All trace of innocence. He made me his:
My boldest lover ever and my bliss.
Author's Note
I like my men older. Tell me how you like yours in your own words
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Re. Bliss
18th Dec 2022 3:49pm
Men who take control. Any body size as long as they know what to do.
Men to render me blind in bliss. Now give me that and I’m you’re girl.
Men to render me blind in bliss. Now give me that and I’m you’re girl.
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Re: Re. Bliss
22nd Dec 2022 00:29am
Re. Bliss
The alluring imagery of your erotic peccadillos is so uniquely enjoyed.. some wonderfully fine ink, dear poetess....I adore this share, which I find deeply insightful and wonderfully intimate.
I hope you are doing well.... Happy holidays...
🌹💙
I hope you are doing well.... Happy holidays...
🌹💙
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22nd Dec 2022 00:30am
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19th Dec 2022 00:24am
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Anonymous
21st Dec 2022 11:12pm
Mmmmm I very much dig the older!!!!
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22nd Dec 2022 00:28am
Re. Bliss
24th Dec 2022 4:13am
I like my men as strictly friends. Lol.
But, me being a man with "a few years" past prime (I admit it!), what does get better is a sense of quiet confidence in the whole nature of things. Our mistakes with women are behind us. -We think so at least, and approach things with that attitude of no fear.
Your write is encouraging as hell! And, bless you!
Merry Christmas! (How old is Santa, anyway?!)
But, me being a man with "a few years" past prime (I admit it!), what does get better is a sense of quiet confidence in the whole nature of things. Our mistakes with women are behind us. -We think so at least, and approach things with that attitude of no fear.
Your write is encouraging as hell! And, bless you!
Merry Christmas! (How old is Santa, anyway?!)
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Re. Bliss
1st Jan 2023 2:06pm
Fabulous
A harmonious piece of endless lust
Distinctive verses and make us enjoy
will done
A harmonious piece of endless lust
Distinctive verses and make us enjoy
will done
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Re. Bliss
19th Jan 2023 8:50pm
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