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A Different Day
Today is a different day
What do you say when the world turns upside down
And feelings get turned inside out
When the heart of you
Is no longer there
To beat
And meanings remain
But they’re no longer the same
How do you explain the things you can’t say
To the silence
How do you live with silence
In the disquiet that seems to scream
And I don’t know where to turn
Without you
What do you say when the world turns upside down
And feelings get turned inside out
When the heart of you
Is no longer there
To beat
And meanings remain
But they’re no longer the same
How do you explain the things you can’t say
To the silence
How do you live with silence
In the disquiet that seems to scream
And I don’t know where to turn
Without you
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Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 1:05am
good afternoon dearest poet today has been a different kind of day for me too
I feel disconnected that you are feeling this and still desire the one you love is beautiful to me
you will come back to yourself or better with a new perspective ❤️
I feel disconnected that you are feeling this and still desire the one you love is beautiful to me
you will come back to yourself or better with a new perspective ❤️
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Re: Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 9:41am
There is distance in this write. I've been blessed in different ways. Its funny how often life turns out like that 🌼
Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 1:28am
Re: Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 9:39am
They say it wouldn't hurt if it wasn't real. Unfortunately, real doesn't always mean meant to be be. I'm good now. Thanks for dropping by 🌼
Re: Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 3:19pm
Yes, I agree about things “meant to be”
I’m so happy to hear you are better now!
🥂 to happiness
I’m so happy to hear you are better now!
🥂 to happiness
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Re: Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 8:15pm
Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 3:42am
Man- this hurts to read. You put me right in that
Different Day. So well written and I felt every line.
Hang in there:)
Different Day. So well written and I felt every line.
Hang in there:)
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Re: Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 9:36am
Thank you. This was written a while back and I'm in a good place now.
Thank you for caring my friend 🌼
Thank you for caring my friend 🌼
Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 9:07am
Dear AJ,
Poetically speaking this is so appealing because I think so many of us have experienced painful similarities in this write.
Personally speaking, trying to put one foot in front of the other while trying to regain balance and a heartbeat is about the best one can do. This is a difficult subject on which to comment but a brilliantly heartfelt poem. Xo
H🌷
Poetically speaking this is so appealing because I think so many of us have experienced painful similarities in this write.
Personally speaking, trying to put one foot in front of the other while trying to regain balance and a heartbeat is about the best one can do. This is a difficult subject on which to comment but a brilliantly heartfelt poem. Xo
H🌷
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Re: Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 9:34am
I've had my fair share of practice with this subject. I'm fine. At the time this was written, perhaps not so much but I lived and learned 🌼
Re: Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 9:40am
Re: Re. A Different Day
15th Dec 2022 9:43am
Lol, sometimes my whole life seems like a past tense situation...including the present! 🌼😉