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Equilibrium
Structure without freedom
becomes stagnated
Freedom without structure
equals chaos
In all areas, be it
sport, art, society or general life
one must find a balance
between these forces
if one is to succeed and indeed thrive
becomes stagnated
Freedom without structure
equals chaos
In all areas, be it
sport, art, society or general life
one must find a balance
between these forces
if one is to succeed and indeed thrive
Published 12th Dec 2022
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12th Dec 2022 11:32am
Dear M,
I quite agree. That happy medium, or these days I’ll settle for medium- seems elusive. That second stanza is particularly meaningful. Wonderful write. H🌷
I quite agree. That happy medium, or these days I’ll settle for medium- seems elusive. That second stanza is particularly meaningful. Wonderful write. H🌷
17th Dec 2022 12:09pm
Thank you H
Yes finding our own happy medium is a never ending journey, as soon as we get comfortable the scale tips and again we search
🙏💙
Yes finding our own happy medium is a never ending journey, as soon as we get comfortable the scale tips and again we search
🙏💙
12th Dec 2022 2:51pm
There's days when it's definitely off kilter but in general, it's always a balancing act, innit?! ...
Nicely penned observation, dear poet.
I enjoyed your thought process and poetic voice.
Thank you for sharing 🙏🏻
🌹 💙
Nicely penned observation, dear poet.
I enjoyed your thought process and poetic voice.
Thank you for sharing 🙏🏻
🌹 💙
17th Dec 2022 12:12pm
Thank bluevelvete for your kind words and continued support hope you are well 😀
A balancing act it surely is
🙏💙
A balancing act it surely is
🙏💙
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