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Once a muse...
Because you changed me.
Gently,
sometimes violently
Imperceptably,
yet undeniably
Finger-picking the strings of my heart
Splashing colour across my canvas
Lodging phrases in subtext of my mind
and I am
forever
different.
Over time and distance
you inhabit chambers of my heart
where doors never fully close,
because now I see with your eyes
and hear with your ears,
and in the sharing
beauty is closer to complete
and I am closer to whole
and you --
Once a muse,
always....
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Re. Once a muse...
11th Dec 2022 6:08pm
We should all be so fortunate, k.
Totally tender and sweet.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Totally tender and sweet.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Once a muse...
11th Dec 2022 10:23pm
Re. Once a muse...
11th Dec 2022 7:37pm
Re: Re. Once a muse...
11th Dec 2022 10:24pm
Re. Once a muse...
11th Dec 2022 7:55pm
Beautiful offering
They leave their marks and impressions often for years....
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They leave their marks and impressions often for years....
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Re: Re. Once a muse...
11th Dec 2022 10:25pm
Yes, that they do.... and some of them remain steadfast friends, if we're lucky. 😉
Thanks always, Poet.
❤️k
Thanks always, Poet.
❤️k
Re. Once a muse...
11th Dec 2022 10:52pm
Dear K,
You’re so welcome! Anytime I can muse and amuse you, I’m there! Hehe just funnin ya! This is a lovely nod to that special someone who can motivate and help create the talent we’re so lucky to read and hear on this site from you. The opening and closing lines are serious grabbers the in between lines, serious love!
Great piece. H🌷
You’re so welcome! Anytime I can muse and amuse you, I’m there! Hehe just funnin ya! This is a lovely nod to that special someone who can motivate and help create the talent we’re so lucky to read and hear on this site from you. The opening and closing lines are serious grabbers the in between lines, serious love!
Great piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Once a muse...
11th Dec 2022 11:31pm
Dear H,
I have been lucky to have a few special people over the years, but all my poets deserve a piece of this love too! You encourage & lift me up, and challenge me with your own beautiful offerings. Thank you for being a star in the constellation of my poetry world.
❤️k
I have been lucky to have a few special people over the years, but all my poets deserve a piece of this love too! You encourage & lift me up, and challenge me with your own beautiful offerings. Thank you for being a star in the constellation of my poetry world.
❤️k
Re. Once a muse...
12th Dec 2022 3:41am
Hi BK
What a broad umbrella they can inspire. Anger, love, strength, etc... As writers I feel we are lucky to be
able to connect with people in that sense. Not everyone has that luxury:)
Wonderful write!
What a broad umbrella they can inspire. Anger, love, strength, etc... As writers I feel we are lucky to be
able to connect with people in that sense. Not everyone has that luxury:)
Wonderful write!
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Re: Re. Once a muse...
12th Dec 2022 11:24am
Yes, it's all about the connection...thanks for your presence here. 😊
❤️k
❤️k
Re. Once a muse...
12th Dec 2022 2:40pm
Re: Re. Once a muse...
13th Dec 2022 1:45am
Thank you! Writing as if I'm speaking directly "to" someone is just what comes naturally to me... sometimes I worry that I'm kind of stuck in this style and it's too repetitive, but if I try to make it into something else, it just doesn't feel genuine. I appreciate your encouragement.
❤k
❤k
Re: Re. Once a muse...
14th Dec 2022 4:11am
Re. Once a muse...
Anonymous
4th Jan 2023 5:15pm
This is so lovely
They so last forever
They so last forever
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6th Jan 2023 00:47am