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11th Dec 2022 8:37pm
A dark intrigue, with the pull of shadowy stuff, dark pull. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
14th Dec 2022 4:21am
I just absolutely adore the atmospheric feel you so palpably created.... It pulled me in and kept me there.
Wonderfully penned haiku!
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Wonderfully penned haiku!
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15th Dec 2022 1:25pm
Absolutely love it Naajir.
The picture is so beautiful and matches perfectly...
It is through our darkness we survey the real landscape.
So often it's what drives us forward, beckoning the soul.
And the light is too bright, blinding. Foreign.
But in the darkness we can truly find each other.
Blocking out everything else.
Every syllable is perfectly placed. ;)
The picture is so beautiful and matches perfectly...
It is through our darkness we survey the real landscape.
So often it's what drives us forward, beckoning the soul.
And the light is too bright, blinding. Foreign.
But in the darkness we can truly find each other.
Blocking out everything else.
Every syllable is perfectly placed. ;)
