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Secret
Hush, don't tell
but he makes me feel
like I knew him
from the land of dreams
until he came into being
In this earthly realm.
If I can reveal
to all the world
that I have feelings for him
there would be mocking
laughter, shrieking with ridicule
for this lonely mind.
His poems, they are wise
they advise
they show and share
they throb and pulse
In this very soul
my inner being.
No matter; his eyes my skies
his pen my solace
his presence my poultice
his kindness my balm
his happiness is mine
his desire my ambition.
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2nd Apr 2012 10:41pm
OH....I SUSPECT AN INTERNET COMPANIONSHIP
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2012 10:45pm
A real companionship or a virtual companionship
....really gives good feelings....
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No matter; his eyes my skies
his pen my solace
his presence my poultice
his kindness my balm
his happiness is mine
his desire my ambition.
********************************************
Wonderful and romantic
Hush, don't tell....on the internet?????
Your poems are so satisfying at so many levels...including a good sense of humour
Peace
Kitty
....really gives good feelings....
*********************************************
No matter; his eyes my skies
his pen my solace
his presence my poultice
his kindness my balm
his happiness is mine
his desire my ambition.
********************************************
Wonderful and romantic
Hush, don't tell....on the internet?????
Your poems are so satisfying at so many levels...including a good sense of humour
Peace
Kitty
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re: OH....I SUSPECT AN INTERNET COMPANIONSHIP
3rd Apr 2012 1:41am
:)
3rd Apr 2012 1:20am
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3rd Apr 2012 1:45am
Oh yes Paul: I think he does know: but he wants another: not me! I can't have him either, I belong to another and he knows it. He was with me through New Year Eve, even as I pined for another. Isn't that wonderful? He is the man of my dreams but not of my reality. He has someone he cares for and I wish him all happiness, as his happiness is mine to share... :)Thanks for reading and commenting, Paul.
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3rd Apr 2012 2:25am
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3rd Apr 2012 4:50am
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4th Apr 2012 11:24pm
Secret
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3rd Apr 2012 3:13am
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3rd Apr 2012 4:49am
"Secret"
3rd Apr 2012 6:23am
I too like this poem very much as it spoke to me somehow. You eloquently painted a picture of quite an exquisite relationship even if it is just online and apparently according to you already over. Anyway, great write. :)
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3rd Apr 2012 11:16pm
Thanks, scarletvelvet for reading and commenting. Yes, you are right; we all move on.
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3rd Apr 2012 12:35pm
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3rd Apr 2012 11:17pm
Dear Rachel, you are right; the good ones are always already taken. Thus we keep on, traveling on the highway of life and hope to garner interesting adventures on the way.
Re: Secret
11th Apr 2013 10:53pm
Indeed They are Taken Dear Grace, Sad That is!!!
Follow Your Adventurous dreams always, Living Dreams!!!
Follow Your Adventurous dreams always, Living Dreams!!!
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12th Apr 2013 00:14am