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reality
we all get our hearts broken and we all die
these things are inevitable
Ive had my heart broken
and now I'm looking forward
to the somber hand of death
to grant me my leave here
(this place sickens and discourages me)
these things are inevitable
Ive had my heart broken
and now I'm looking forward
to the somber hand of death
to grant me my leave here
(this place sickens and discourages me)
Published 5th Feb 2010
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Anonymous
5th Feb 2010 7:06am
Not quite as artful as some of your work, but still darkly potent and finely wrought. The 'sombre hand of death' expression was beautiful.
5th Feb 2010 7:12am
yeah not very artful.. more prosey.. if that's a word.. if the somber hand of death doesn't come find me soon I'm going to go looking for her..
5th Feb 2010 10:49am
True that is isn't quite as artful as some of your other master pieces, but i can relate to this piece a lot, although i can relate to some of your other poems, this one stands out for me,
x hang in there,
x hang in there,
5th Feb 2010 3:27pm
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