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You and I
Noir
You and I
Glimpsed in vignettes
In the dull gray half light
Of night
When thoughts give way to feelings
Dissolving into sensations
Addictions
You adrift
Erotic poetry in motion
Lost in the waves as they rise
Your words brokenly emphatic
As chants wove with moans and sighs
And I astride
A Jove glorying in my power
fierce focused in my intent
As a hawk when he strikes
Swift to the prey
A stallion pawing the air
Raw and untamed
A bull, full muscled
Knowing but one intent
To charge again and again
To fill you with all the lust a woman could stir in a man
Primal
Kisses strewn, askew, and then left off
In rythymic slap
Sensuous
Hypnotic
Until the night erupts in a million stars
And I fall
Again a man
Into your arms
You and I
Glimpsed in vignettes
In the dull gray half light
Of night
When thoughts give way to feelings
Dissolving into sensations
Addictions
You adrift
Erotic poetry in motion
Lost in the waves as they rise
Your words brokenly emphatic
As chants wove with moans and sighs
And I astride
A Jove glorying in my power
fierce focused in my intent
As a hawk when he strikes
Swift to the prey
A stallion pawing the air
Raw and untamed
A bull, full muscled
Knowing but one intent
To charge again and again
To fill you with all the lust a woman could stir in a man
Primal
Kisses strewn, askew, and then left off
In rythymic slap
Sensuous
Hypnotic
Until the night erupts in a million stars
And I fall
Again a man
Into your arms
Published 12th Nov 2022
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13th Nov 2022 5:06am
Dear AJ,
As it should be. That was one thought I had as I read this. The poem is full of the best in terms of human nature and how it could be when the partner is right. Lovely. H🌷
As it should be. That was one thought I had as I read this. The poem is full of the best in terms of human nature and how it could be when the partner is right. Lovely. H🌷
13th Nov 2022 11:00am
