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Sunrise
Slight breeze
tickling our souls deeply
full on Autumn
Its wee early hours
shes showing off, mother nature
Fire red, orange, yellow, no blue
We embrace
we kiss
then we lean into the other
You are my forever sunrise
the fire within me
I love you babe
tickling our souls deeply
full on Autumn
Its wee early hours
shes showing off, mother nature
Fire red, orange, yellow, no blue
We embrace
we kiss
then we lean into the other
You are my forever sunrise
the fire within me
I love you babe
Author's Note
Living waterside, the sunrise is ridiculously beautiful.....
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Re. Sunrise
7th Nov 2022 2:33am
Lucky you
I'm inland surrounded by cement
River 2 long blocks away when I need it ...
BIG LIKE
I'm inland surrounded by cement
River 2 long blocks away when I need it ...
BIG LIKE
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7th Nov 2022 2:38am
Re. Sunrise
7th Nov 2022 2:54am
Nothing like a welcoming breeze after a muggy, yucky day.
Your poem cools this day.
Wonderful write.
Your poem cools this day.
Wonderful write.
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7th Nov 2022 3:02am
Re. Sunrise
7th Nov 2022 8:54am
Dear ML,
There is something about water and autumn and a loved one. No better recipe for an awesome existence. I enjoyed how you write about the scenery around you and the love for your husband. It’s lovely and very endearing. H🌷
There is something about water and autumn and a loved one. No better recipe for an awesome existence. I enjoyed how you write about the scenery around you and the love for your husband. It’s lovely and very endearing. H🌷
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Re: Re. Sunrise
8th Aug 2023 6:48am
You are correct, dear. Thanks honey. The world around me is usually in my favor and my hubs is the most spectacular specimen of any male on earth. I got lucky. <3
Re. Sunrise
7th Nov 2022 10:58am
Great beauties of nature wrapped up succinctly—sunrise, autumn, love.
Well done! ☺️
Well done! ☺️
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Re. Sunrise
7th Nov 2022 2:13pm
One of my favorite elements of writing is the imbued milieu, an image that rises up before the mind's eye and emanates feeling. Beautifully rendered.
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Re. Sunrise
21st Dec 2022 00:26am
If I had any skill in crafting I song I would get an agreement going so I could make these words a song and give it a Frank Sinatra treatment!
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