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If Love Breaks Your Heart
If a love breaks your heart, you’ll live.
If you fail to love for fear of pain,
you’ll die having never lived.
If you fail to love for fear of pain,
you’ll die having never lived.
Author's Note
I wrote this for my daughter. Her beauty and maturity amaze me.
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Re. If Love Breaks Your Heart
Nice poem I love it
It's true, thank you for the wonderful poem
If Love Breaks Your Heart
This not i ture love
Run away because
Your heart needs true love
If a love breaks your heart, you’ll live.
Because the heart will heal with a new love
If you fail to love for fear of pain,
There is no place for fear of pain in love
you’ll die having never lived.
Because love is life in its bitterness and its sweetness
Without love we will never live
MP
It's true, thank you for the wonderful poem
If Love Breaks Your Heart
This not i ture love
Run away because
Your heart needs true love
If a love breaks your heart, you’ll live.
Because the heart will heal with a new love
If you fail to love for fear of pain,
There is no place for fear of pain in love
you’ll die having never lived.
Because love is life in its bitterness and its sweetness
Without love we will never live
MP
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3rd Nov 2022 2:47am
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Re. If Love Breaks Your Heart
1st Nov 2022 1:10pm
Hello Nizana,
Well worded lines. Love is love. It is not a bed of roses. Love is an adventure of passion. It takes it to the pinnacle heights without fear and inspires us to live life with spirit. I know your daughter is very beautiful and beat of a heart.
Love,
KS
P.S: Is Avatar is your photo? Who is in the photo you used here.
Well worded lines. Love is love. It is not a bed of roses. Love is an adventure of passion. It takes it to the pinnacle heights without fear and inspires us to live life with spirit. I know your daughter is very beautiful and beat of a heart.
Love,
KS
P.S: Is Avatar is your photo? Who is in the photo you used here.
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That is a photo of my daughter. I blurred slightly before posting. The avatar for my account is me smoking some recreational inspiration.
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1st Nov 2022 1:57pm
Hello Nizana,
Thanks for sharing info. You look so much in the sky with your dreams and thoughts. You daughter has grown up and looks way better with nice props and appearance.
Love,
KS
P.S: Can you please share PDF of your book?
Thanks for sharing info. You look so much in the sky with your dreams and thoughts. You daughter has grown up and looks way better with nice props and appearance.
Love,
KS
P.S: Can you please share PDF of your book?
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Re. If Love Breaks Your Heart
1st Nov 2022 1:46pm
This three line of poem conveys a very very deep message ,,,,,,,,,,,,,I had to read it over and over again to be immersed in the backdrop "dying never having to have lived "
Nizana I get the message you passed across with those lines of words
Nizana I get the message you passed across with those lines of words
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1st Nov 2022 1:49pm
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1st Nov 2022 9:26pm
Re. If Love Breaks Your Heart
2nd Nov 2022 2:11am
You got to believe in love but you can't believe in a guarantee. Keep on writing.
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Re. If Love Breaks Your Heart
2nd Nov 2022 6:18am
A philosophical message in these few lines. Picture definitely a beautiful daughter living love life to the full.
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