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Touch Of A Demons Tear
There was a time when I traded my soul to the devil, oh how happy he was when we danced among Heavens tears flooding the earth, weeping over my sin of lust.
Held captive in a strange place, I always wondered if it existed. Only sound was crackling fire around me, satanic claws tore thru my skin as satan held me closer to his fiery soul, whirling me thru flames, we danced while falling deeper in the endless pit of hell.
Staring into mesmerizing glowing red eyes, false visions of changing illusions, he was you. How wonderful it was to feel your hot passion as we kissed upon fake purple petals. My body became hotter with every touch, our bodies climaxed like never before.
Soon though all was still, I fell on bended knees, my body set a fire from his deep breath. With fiery tears I looked upon him, there he was crushing my heart as it bled thru his claws, but my lips were smiling as I heard your voice and life bled from me.
Last thing I remember, was the touch of a demons tear down my cheek.
Copyright © 2022 flowergirl all rights Reserved
Held captive in a strange place, I always wondered if it existed. Only sound was crackling fire around me, satanic claws tore thru my skin as satan held me closer to his fiery soul, whirling me thru flames, we danced while falling deeper in the endless pit of hell.
Staring into mesmerizing glowing red eyes, false visions of changing illusions, he was you. How wonderful it was to feel your hot passion as we kissed upon fake purple petals. My body became hotter with every touch, our bodies climaxed like never before.
Soon though all was still, I fell on bended knees, my body set a fire from his deep breath. With fiery tears I looked upon him, there he was crushing my heart as it bled thru his claws, but my lips were smiling as I heard your voice and life bled from me.
Last thing I remember, was the touch of a demons tear down my cheek.
Copyright © 2022 flowergirl all rights Reserved
Published 1st Nov 2022
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1st Nov 2022 9:29am
Absolutely fantastic read, awesome write my Purple princess
Heartfelt and passionate
Love and light
Ron xx
Heartfelt and passionate
Love and light
Ron xx
2nd Nov 2022 2:10am
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2nd Nov 2022 5:06am
Dear FG,
As Gripping a tale as I’ve ever read. Interesting perspective and closing line leaves me wanting more story. Great write. H🌷
As Gripping a tale as I’ve ever read. Interesting perspective and closing line leaves me wanting more story. Great write. H🌷
14th Nov 2022 1:23pm
Wow! Absolutely gripping and beautiful. From the first line… The fallen angels lusted after mortal women and that is definitely the feel I got here. Dancing among Heavens tears… that imagery, I could feel it along with the sin of lust. Satanic claws tearing and whirling thru the flames. A continued sensual experience… It reminds me of Hellraiser, just watched the new one, where the cenobites say we have such sights to show you… pushing the limits of pleasure and pain.
An incredible lover can truly make you feel such wonders. Captivating your mind and capturing you completely despite anything else. You need that fix, that climax even more… it’s addictive. You lose yourself becoming a Succubus. Transformed into a demon serving the Devil.
Absolutely magnificent FG.
An incredible lover can truly make you feel such wonders. Captivating your mind and capturing you completely despite anything else. You need that fix, that climax even more… it’s addictive. You lose yourself becoming a Succubus. Transformed into a demon serving the Devil.
Absolutely magnificent FG.
