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To See Rachel Kiss And Touch Her
Karen finished taking her
shower and was about to
reach for a yellow towel
only to see Rachel kiss
and touch her all over
before she heard the
doorbell ring and saw
that she was alone
for her roommate died.
shower and was about to
reach for a yellow towel
only to see Rachel kiss
and touch her all over
before she heard the
doorbell ring and saw
that she was alone
for her roommate died.
Published 26th Oct 2022
Author's Note
In this free verse poem, one person is being paid a visit in the bathroom by a friend that person never expected to see.
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27th Oct 2022 6:45am
Reads like a lesbian version of the Demi Moore-Patrick Swayze scenes in 'Ghost'.
27th Oct 2022 9:03pm
