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STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
I'm sick of your angst
Not because you're fucking whiney
It's because there's a Greatness in you
You won't acknowledge
You can SING
You're versatile
Folk, Rock, PUNK
You name it
We all want what you HAVE
Naturally
SO SHUT THE FUCK UP WITH YOUR TEARS
If I wanted drippy sweet songs I'd go to the BIG BOX DRUG STORE where I want to slit my wrists from fem packaged generic digital vocal splatter
You get what I'm saying BT ?
ANGUISH AND FEAR MAKE YOU
SING
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/464545-singing-my-self-loathing/
Not because you're fucking whiney
It's because there's a Greatness in you
You won't acknowledge
You can SING
You're versatile
Folk, Rock, PUNK
You name it
We all want what you HAVE
Naturally
SO SHUT THE FUCK UP WITH YOUR TEARS
If I wanted drippy sweet songs I'd go to the BIG BOX DRUG STORE where I want to slit my wrists from fem packaged generic digital vocal splatter
You get what I'm saying BT ?
ANGUISH AND FEAR MAKE YOU
SING
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/464545-singing-my-self-loathing/
Author's Note
Dedicated to BrokenTitanium who could sing the fuck out of the phone book if we still had phone books
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Re. STOP APOLOGIZING
26th Oct 2022 3:03pm
LOL 😆
Nothing like a little tough love from the urban cowboy! Thanks for giving me the push to post... thought I better comment first before anyone thinks I'm offended by your tone. Deeply appreciate your support, my friend.
Keep making me be better.
❤️❤️❤️k
Nothing like a little tough love from the urban cowboy! Thanks for giving me the push to post... thought I better comment first before anyone thinks I'm offended by your tone. Deeply appreciate your support, my friend.
Keep making me be better.
❤️❤️❤️k
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Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING
26th Oct 2022 3:09pm
Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
26th Oct 2022 6:55pm
Well damn! What a powerful message. :p
"It's because there's a Greatness in you"
Absolutely, Canadian maple syrup and Carolina Reaper peppers.
BT is sweet, spicy, and hot in all the best ways. ;)
I love this grand tribute.
Totally can SING. PUNK - Love it!
Definitely has it naturally, so damn obvious with those videos.
You are giving me nightmares about drippy sweet songs now.
ANGUISH AND FEAR MAKE YOU SING. So perfectly said.
Often those are so motivating, they make us push forward.
So deserving of this praise... BT
"It's because there's a Greatness in you"
Absolutely, Canadian maple syrup and Carolina Reaper peppers.
BT is sweet, spicy, and hot in all the best ways. ;)
I love this grand tribute.
Totally can SING. PUNK - Love it!
Definitely has it naturally, so damn obvious with those videos.
You are giving me nightmares about drippy sweet songs now.
ANGUISH AND FEAR MAKE YOU SING. So perfectly said.
Often those are so motivating, they make us push forward.
So deserving of this praise... BT
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Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
26th Oct 2022 7:33pm
This is a fucking A comment
Thank you for paying tribute to BT as well
She can really bring it and anyone who listens to DARK and STORMY will see her Greatness
She's a voice of her time and an amazing human ❤
BIG LIKE YOUR COMMENT K ...
THX
X
Thank you for paying tribute to BT as well
She can really bring it and anyone who listens to DARK and STORMY will see her Greatness
She's a voice of her time and an amazing human ❤
BIG LIKE YOUR COMMENT K ...
THX
X
Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
27th Oct 2022 4:43am
Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
26th Oct 2022 7:05pm
BOOM! We all need a good shake, rattle & bitch slap, once in a while .
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Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
26th Oct 2022 7:35pm
Well ML
You've come to the right place
As you know I lay it on the line and say what I feel
Appreciate your visit and comment
You've got Chops !!
You've come to the right place
As you know I lay it on the line and say what I feel
Appreciate your visit and comment
You've got Chops !!
Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
27th Oct 2022 4:44am
Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
27th Oct 2022 8:20am
Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
27th Oct 2022 2:25am
So I guess I'm sorry means shit to you. So sing your fucking heart out. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
27th Oct 2022 2:27am
Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
27th Oct 2022 4:45am
Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
27th Oct 2022 8:23am
You better or else I'll have to pay a visit !
Wow think about that Hangover 😕....
Wow think about that Hangover 😕....
Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
28th Oct 2022 6:38am
Dear PS,
Freaking right??!!! Her voice is gorgeous. It’s earthy yet crystal clear. Warm yet edgy. And she can hit the damn notes and stay in key! What I wouldn’t give! You’re both terrific. H🌷
Freaking right??!!! Her voice is gorgeous. It’s earthy yet crystal clear. Warm yet edgy. And she can hit the damn notes and stay in key! What I wouldn’t give! You’re both terrific. H🌷
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Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
28th Oct 2022 11:29am
Dear H,
Yeah that bitch really has it.
She's getting there.
She's held back by where she lives. A beautiful Canadian hamlet or something. Gorgeous but sounds like suburban hell but what do I know ? She's starting to get gigs at the Farmer's Market. Told her to skip the pretty songs and go for the screech PUNK ....
THX
PS
😶🤠👺
Yeah that bitch really has it.
She's getting there.
She's held back by where she lives. A beautiful Canadian hamlet or something. Gorgeous but sounds like suburban hell but what do I know ? She's starting to get gigs at the Farmer's Market. Told her to skip the pretty songs and go for the screech PUNK ....
THX
PS
😶🤠👺
Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
28th Oct 2022 12:14pm
Aw, thank you H. You're the best of the bestest thing here on DU. 🥰
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
28th Oct 2022 12:17pm
LOL.... Mr Poet, your description of my life made me snort out loud! (You're not wrong, though...) Now I have Weird Al's "Amish Paradise" playing in my head. 😆
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Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
28th Oct 2022 12:17pm
We ought to get H drunk and find out her real story.
Actually you two could duet together
That would be righteous
Actually you two could duet together
That would be righteous
Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
28th Oct 2022 12:27pm
Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
28th Oct 2022 12:36pm
Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
1st Nov 2022 5:28am
Dear K and PS,
I love it! Love it all! Plastered poets. Righteous duet-ing and the hilarity of you two realizing just how dull I am. 🤓 but a cocktail or two would not go amiss. 🍸🥃🍷
I love it! Love it all! Plastered poets. Righteous duet-ing and the hilarity of you two realizing just how dull I am. 🤓 but a cocktail or two would not go amiss. 🍸🥃🍷
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Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
1st Nov 2022 10:03am
Dull is the new thrilling
Bartender, 3 glasses, no ice, leave the bottle ....
🍸🍸🍸
Bartender, 3 glasses, no ice, leave the bottle ....
🍸🍸🍸
Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
16th Nov 2022 4:15pm
"Poet-motivational-Speak-er. Book your next event! Will verbally smack-wake you up and give you the confidence you need!"
I can almost see the banner.
BIG LIKE
I can almost see the banner.
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. STOP APOLOGIZING ( paying homage to brokentitanium )
16th Nov 2022 4:16pm