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south grand
it's fitting
that i should want to die right now
feeling entombed
within the concrete of this place
sublevel byway
a living grave
machine roar resounding
off the dull grey everything
cigarettes in the work truck
a couple drags would be nice
the keys nestled in the cup holder
right there with them
locked in
irritatingly,
annoyingly,
dumb-as-fuckingly
that i should want to die right now
feeling entombed
within the concrete of this place
sublevel byway
a living grave
machine roar resounding
off the dull grey everything
cigarettes in the work truck
a couple drags would be nice
the keys nestled in the cup holder
right there with them
locked in
irritatingly,
annoyingly,
dumb-as-fuckingly
Published 24th Oct 2022
| Edited 25th Oct 2022
Author's Note
super busy? long day ahead? might as well lock the keys in the truck.
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9th Dec 2022 6:20am
26th Dec 2022 7:22am
Discovering your profile has been a breath of cool, fresh air this morning. It’s rare I find a profile that I haven’t come across before which provides properly imaginative and psychological poetry like this. I like how you render the narrator’s stream-of-consciousness.
