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I have No Body
I have no body
oh no
no hands, no fingers, or toes
I'm broken up
and will be for forever
quite transparent
everyone sees through me
might as well be part of the air
because I have no body
no body to meet friends with
so boring this lack of existence
I feel sick
my head hurts
I don't even have one on my shoulders
because as you know
I have no body
or no body to love
who could love someone with no heart?
I am of no comfort
I'm here, there, yet nowhere
am I even a soul?
I know I can feel
but lack a thinking brain
is this what it's like to be insane?
my eyes aren't there to see whats here
what I wouldn't give to have you near
even a fight would suffice
but as it is I have no ears to even hear
I'm just the ghost in your room
floating around with no end
hoping to find others who are dead
oh no
no hands, no fingers, or toes
I'm broken up
and will be for forever
quite transparent
everyone sees through me
might as well be part of the air
because I have no body
no body to meet friends with
so boring this lack of existence
I feel sick
my head hurts
I don't even have one on my shoulders
because as you know
I have no body
or no body to love
who could love someone with no heart?
I am of no comfort
I'm here, there, yet nowhere
am I even a soul?
I know I can feel
but lack a thinking brain
is this what it's like to be insane?
my eyes aren't there to see whats here
what I wouldn't give to have you near
even a fight would suffice
but as it is I have no ears to even hear
I'm just the ghost in your room
floating around with no end
hoping to find others who are dead
Published 19th Oct 2022
Author's Note
On the 13th day of Halloween I give to thee... nothing.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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19th Oct 2022 7:53am
I have no words. Only thoughts with no fingers to type them.
This is a very intriguing poem. I'll be back to reread it if I can find my eyes.
This is a very intriguing poem. I'll be back to reread it if I can find my eyes.
19th Oct 2022 7:56am
Haha. You might want to check if your dead 😉
Thanks for the read, friend. Very much appreciated.
Thanks for the read, friend. Very much appreciated.
19th Oct 2022 11:10am
I love how disassociated I feel after reading this. You really captured a nebulous sense of self, it even reminds me a bit of body dysmorphia.
19th Oct 2022 11:30am
Thank you. That's such a great compliment 😁 I was trying to get the feeling of depression in away.
The comment is much appreciated.
The comment is much appreciated.
19th Oct 2022 12:16pm
Deep in thoughts and feelings sometimes we have to take sometime to understand that we all feel like being invisible 👊✍
20th Oct 2022 2:39am
Or wanting to reappear if your a ghost haha. Thanks for the comment, friend 😁
21st Oct 2022 9:54pm
I like that thought very thought provoking I wonder sometimes what it would feel like to be a ghost to be able to be seen and not seen through open eyes 👁🤔🙈🙉🙊👀
20th Oct 2022 5:47am
I'm visualizing the intermittent clapping I'd be doing @ this outstanding poem along with additional vivid written feedback, shame, since I too, have no hands... I'd also have a loud healthy whistle to add punctuation to your job well done; but alas, I'm without my teeth and lips...My emotional state of empathy, connection and resonance emanates across the miles...As I often feel similarly; a shell who's virtually unseen...
Great ink, DC!
Your ideas are truly impressive...and your poetic voice fierce!
Excellent poeting -
💙👻
Great ink, DC!
Your ideas are truly impressive...and your poetic voice fierce!
Excellent poeting -
💙👻
20th Oct 2022 7:05am
👻+👻=👻 👻
Hehe at least I'm not alone 😁
Thank you friend for the lovely compliment. It means a lot coming from such a talented person as yourself.
Hehe at least I'm not alone 😁
Thank you friend for the lovely compliment. It means a lot coming from such a talented person as yourself.
20th Oct 2022 11:09pm
This write was cute, yet haunting and relatable. Always love reading poems that make me feel a unique combination of emotions at the same time that haven't met before. Well done!
21st Oct 2022 2:46am
Well thank you. I always appreciate seeing new faces. Glad you enjoyed my poem
