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Waters
She draws me down into her waters
where the brave only wish to be
drowning in a deep connection
her contours are all I need
my fingers splash against her body
and I suck in her gifts of life
succumbing to all her senses
that soon will sure ignite
I kiss her soul and wander
exploring this new found hand
her rivers running rapid
carrying me to distant lands
where the brave only wish to be
drowning in a deep connection
her contours are all I need
my fingers splash against her body
and I suck in her gifts of life
succumbing to all her senses
that soon will sure ignite
I kiss her soul and wander
exploring this new found hand
her rivers running rapid
carrying me to distant lands
Published 17th Oct 2022
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17th Oct 2022 10:53pm
18th Oct 2022 9:30pm
17th Oct 2022 11:04pm
Very gently romantic. A romance of imagination.
And a lovely last line...
That's where I go, to distant lands
And a lovely last line...
That's where I go, to distant lands
18th Oct 2022 9:30pm
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
17th Oct 2022 11:43pm
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2022 5:33am
I loved this beautiful piece where you used simple language to explain the emotions for someone..
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