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The Candle Still Burns
He told her magic wasn't real.
She laughed.
He has been under her spell for years.
She laughed.
He has been under her spell for years.
Published 16th Oct 2022
| Edited 4th Dec 2022
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- Edited 30th Oct 2022 1:45am
16th Oct 2022 4:17pm
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16th Oct 2022 7:23pm
16th Oct 2022 7:41pm
16th Oct 2022 8:54pm
Dear N,
Fantastic! I always get a chuckle when I hear people say they don’t believe in magic. Your poem is So well said I can’t comment on this perfection.
H🌷
Fantastic! I always get a chuckle when I hear people say they don’t believe in magic. Your poem is So well said I can’t comment on this perfection.
H🌷
17th Oct 2022 2:07am
Love this! hahahaha
True magic is unrecognizable - don't know it's there.
Great write!!
True magic is unrecognizable - don't know it's there.
Great write!!
6th Nov 2022 10:34pm
