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The problem is me
I wish I had at least a bit of self-control
because maybe then all of my problems would be solved
Whenever I have a problem I just wait until it goes away
But perhaps the real issue is that some problems always stay
And I only have myself to blame
Which is too much for me
I cannot take that kind of pain
I can't accept that the real problem is me
because maybe then all of my problems would be solved
Whenever I have a problem I just wait until it goes away
But perhaps the real issue is that some problems always stay
And I only have myself to blame
Which is too much for me
I cannot take that kind of pain
I can't accept that the real problem is me
Published 15th Oct 2022
Author's Note
I'm too passive and not taking the initiative to solve my own problems only creates more
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15th Oct 2022 7:01pm
Dear S,
I found this poem very relatable. I dare say there might be many of us in the same predicament. What I appreciated was your humility in admitting your own shortcomings. Many don’t or can’t. Very well stated. H🌷
I found this poem very relatable. I dare say there might be many of us in the same predicament. What I appreciated was your humility in admitting your own shortcomings. Many don’t or can’t. Very well stated. H🌷
25th Oct 2022 10:02pm
aw thank you :') Hopefully we'll both become better at taking control over our own lives
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- Edited 8th Jul 2023 7:45pm
25th Apr 2023 12:32pm
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