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Why
Why did my tears fall
when the sun was shining
the moonlight was glittering
and my life was full?
Why was I crying
when I heard him whisper
that he was dying
to be with me?
Why did I wail into my pillow
when he said he was coming
to hold my hands
and walk down the aisle with me?
Why was I in despair
when he came home yesterday
and promised forever
to stay?
For
my love for him
are dusts under my feet
trodden by indifference.
when the sun was shining
the moonlight was glittering
and my life was full?
Why was I crying
when I heard him whisper
that he was dying
to be with me?
Why did I wail into my pillow
when he said he was coming
to hold my hands
and walk down the aisle with me?
Why was I in despair
when he came home yesterday
and promised forever
to stay?
For
my love for him
are dusts under my feet
trodden by indifference.
Published 30th Mar 2012
| Edited 5th Feb 2020
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30th Mar 2012 00:03am
Anonymous
30th Mar 2012 1:00am
been there....you wrote it so well
Kitty
Kitty
30th Mar 2012 2:01am
30th Mar 2012 3:30am
I was going to say the same thing kitty said...lol. Very well written.
30th Mar 2012 4:08am
Well, dollface, in most ways we travel parallel paths in this life. Thank you for reading and commenting.
30th Mar 2012 9:18am
30th Mar 2012 2:13pm
30th Mar 2012 10:16am
Passionate and sad poems about a inner conflict.
There should not be first and second places in the generous heart of a woman, because she could love the same way more than a lover.
Obviously this is just my opinion.
Good verses
There should not be first and second places in the generous heart of a woman, because she could love the same way more than a lover.
Obviously this is just my opinion.
Good verses
30th Mar 2012 2:15pm
Luca dear, you can love two people in your life and you wish you can join their personalities in one. Have you ever felt that? Thanks Luca for reading and commenting.
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30th Mar 2012 2:16pm
Hi Veliqua, how are you, dear? hope all is well. thanks for dropping in and reading as well as commenting on this poem.
30th Mar 2012 6:23pm
We are a little slaves of our prejudices and a false morality.
It would be easier for Grace, have different loves, rather than combining them into one Frankenstain, I think.
The perfect companion does not exist.
We could love more than one person at a time if we were not blinded by fear and jealousy.
Well this is my belive. I miss the ancient pagan times, I am afraid.
It would be easier for Grace, have different loves, rather than combining them into one Frankenstain, I think.
The perfect companion does not exist.
We could love more than one person at a time if we were not blinded by fear and jealousy.
Well this is my belive. I miss the ancient pagan times, I am afraid.
30th Mar 2012 11:31pm
Oh yes, we do, don't we, Luca. I would have been a shaman or at least an acolyte.
30th Mar 2012 3:20pm
if i am reading this right
then it is an amazing sight
to have the greatest Love in your Life
2nd only to the Love of Christ....;)
then it is an amazing sight
to have the greatest Love in your Life
2nd only to the Love of Christ....;)
30th Mar 2012 11:32pm
Anonymous
31st Mar 2012 7:43pm
This a wonderful write and it reads as poetic words should-my thought are that All is as it should be-and in accepting this-there is great peace -very good job.
31st Mar 2012 11:09pm
1st Apr 2012 11:57pm
Maybe it's just me, Maybe I read more into words than is meant. But I feel pain and torment in your words. To me, everything you wrote is so expressive, so much so I feel as if it me
2nd Apr 2012 00:08am
Torment it is,chocolateJohn. You read with good insight. Thanks for coming in, reading and commenting.
17th Apr 2012 12:10pm
