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Eclipse
If this piece of me
casts too much light
over things that should
remain hidden, then so be it.
I will never open
spoiled cans of hidden
memories or moments
that tie together past and present.
Most days I think about
endless circles, and waiting to die.
Where is the meaning.
Where is my happiness.
casts too much light
over things that should
remain hidden, then so be it.
I will never open
spoiled cans of hidden
memories or moments
that tie together past and present.
Most days I think about
endless circles, and waiting to die.
Where is the meaning.
Where is my happiness.
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Re. Eclipse
9th Oct 2022 11:03pm
Hey Eerie,
This is really deep. That second stanza is a work of art and expresses
what a lot of us feel about our past issues. Who wants to revisit that? Nobody.
I think the happiness comes in the next second to the next minute to the next day.
Doesn't happen overnight but I will come if you let it:)
This is really deep. That second stanza is a work of art and expresses
what a lot of us feel about our past issues. Who wants to revisit that? Nobody.
I think the happiness comes in the next second to the next minute to the next day.
Doesn't happen overnight but I will come if you let it:)
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Re: Re. Eclipse
10th Oct 2022 6:29pm
Hi, Adelphina,
I agree that it is really not something we want to do. Sometimes some things are necessary for healing, but I think some things should stay buried, especially if nothing good would come of divulging it. Maybe some would disagree with that, but logically, I know I don't have to consider every opinion presented.
As far as happiness is concerned: I had a brief dally with it earlier this year, but I'm learning something about the costs involved with being happy. It's a double-edged sword for me.
Thank you for your lovely comment and for the RL :)
I agree that it is really not something we want to do. Sometimes some things are necessary for healing, but I think some things should stay buried, especially if nothing good would come of divulging it. Maybe some would disagree with that, but logically, I know I don't have to consider every opinion presented.
As far as happiness is concerned: I had a brief dally with it earlier this year, but I'm learning something about the costs involved with being happy. It's a double-edged sword for me.
Thank you for your lovely comment and for the RL :)
Re. Eclipse
9th Oct 2022 11:57pm
We're happy Big Sis to see you post on site, there are so many bright lights on this site. We like that this has a little sadness and a darkness, but we really focused on the circles. Circles indicate life cycles, while circles connecting could eternity over coming time and space. You always post tight pieces Boo, realy really tight work
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Re: Re. Eclipse
10th Oct 2022 6:43pm
I think the circles are very important because of the representation of the ongoing circle of life and death. At this time of my life, I believe that it merely represents active life and death. Right now, I think that once death occurs, something new begins, but rather than there being a circle, it is just a straight line for eternity. But then there is the difficulty with the meaning of eternity, because it seems that it's a concept that humans cannot fully grasp. Nothing in life is forever, so it's hard to really contextualize eternity.
My two-cents, for what it's worth.
Thanks for stopping by and having a read. Love ya, Brother.
My two-cents, for what it's worth.
Thanks for stopping by and having a read. Love ya, Brother.
Re. Eclipse
10th Oct 2022 4:14am
Well my current happiness is seeing that you finally posted something again! My withdrawals have caused me to suffer with dry eyes, from being void of your words.
(Yes, you get that cool reply for coming back in here!)
And you didnt disappoint. "Spoiled cans of hidden memories..." -awesome!
Excellent write, Eerie.
(Yes, you get that cool reply for coming back in here!)
And you didnt disappoint. "Spoiled cans of hidden memories..." -awesome!
Excellent write, Eerie.
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Re: Re. Eclipse
10th Oct 2022 6:46pm
Lol I love a cool reply. But seriously, thank you for that. It's so very appreciated. I needed a short break, but I am glad to be back. I've been museless, and I'm tired of that, sooooo here I am!
I'm glad you liked the piece. At this time, I am working through some serious life questions. Woot!
Thanks for coming by and for the RL.
I'm glad you liked the piece. At this time, I am working through some serious life questions. Woot!
Thanks for coming by and for the RL.
Re. Eclipse
10th Oct 2022 4:20am
My happiness is seeing you back writing …
Hope that means something
BIG LIKE
Hope that means something
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Eclipse
10th Oct 2022 6:48pm
It means the world to me. I am always happy to have you in my comments.
It's good to be back. I think I am about to submerge myself in a season of creativity and I am beyond excited to get it going.
xx
It's good to be back. I think I am about to submerge myself in a season of creativity and I am beyond excited to get it going.
xx
Re. Eclipse
10th Oct 2022 4:24am
Dear E,
About damn time! 😊
(The last full stanza and last line…depression perfection. Fully captures how this all works.)
Out of the gate, stellar return.
H🌷
About damn time! 😊
(The last full stanza and last line…depression perfection. Fully captures how this all works.)
Out of the gate, stellar return.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Eclipse
10th Oct 2022 6:49pm
LOL here I am, in all of my stumbling glory :P
Depression Perfection. That is a good title: You should run with it....
Missed you bunches <3
Depression Perfection. That is a good title: You should run with it....
Missed you bunches <3
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Re: Re. Eclipse
10th Oct 2022 6:54pm
My brain is too steeped in analyzing EVERYTHING to be done with trying to figure it all out. It's my lot in life, I think. On the positive side, it has allowed me to work through some things, so there's that. It more efficiently allows me to be in the moment.
Thanks for the read and RL. Appreciate that.
Thanks for the read and RL. Appreciate that.
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10th Oct 2022 4:15pm
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10th Oct 2022 6:54pm
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11th Oct 2022 11:36am
Re. Eclipse
4th Nov 2022 11:30pm
Hi, Eerie.
I really like what you have written.
Keep on calling on those *endless circles* for inspiration.
Do not wait for death and do not invoke it either.
I really like what you have written.
Keep on calling on those *endless circles* for inspiration.
Do not wait for death and do not invoke it either.
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Re: Re. Eclipse
4th Nov 2022 11:43pm
Any thoughts of invoking are swiftly met with an apology to anyone and no one. I’m not sure how I feel about the circles.
Thanks for stopping by, Marks. It’s always appreciated.
Thanks for stopping by, Marks. It’s always appreciated.
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5th Nov 2022 7:30pm
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11th Dec 2022 1:39am
Re. Eclipse
11th Dec 2022 1:22am
Fuck... that crashes like an asteroid on the surface of the things I wish to not deal with.
LJ
LJ
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Re. Eclipse
11th Dec 2022 3:02am
Re. Eclipse
15th Jan 2023 10:39pm
Beautiful ink spill queen 👸 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
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