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If Frost Met Bukowski, Would they Sniff Glue Together ?
Pretty enticing title huh ?
Hard to resist opening
I'd go for it too
Alas though you've been conned
I know this place
It's all about reads
Sex sells
Misery a little less enthralling
Tried posting elsewhere
Came home though to my brethren
Freedom Is so cherished
You know it not till you wander
Out there though in the wild
You get the broken people
Not so eager to suck your dick
Just because you posted
Thick skins needed
Real world crazies
Occasional lovers of your work
Certified mental patients, no filter to hate
So I'm here for now
Restless though
Our world is in smack down mode
If Frost met Bukowski, would they sniff glue together ?
Hard to resist opening
I'd go for it too
Alas though you've been conned
I know this place
It's all about reads
Sex sells
Misery a little less enthralling
Tried posting elsewhere
Came home though to my brethren
Freedom Is so cherished
You know it not till you wander
Out there though in the wild
You get the broken people
Not so eager to suck your dick
Just because you posted
Thick skins needed
Real world crazies
Occasional lovers of your work
Certified mental patients, no filter to hate
So I'm here for now
Restless though
Our world is in smack down mode
If Frost met Bukowski, would they sniff glue together ?
Published 1st Oct 2022
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1st Oct 2022 11:51am
You know me Lil
I just try to bring it all back home
Thx for the acknowledgement
Appreciate
I just try to bring it all back home
Thx for the acknowledgement
Appreciate
Anonymous
1st Oct 2022 12:54pm
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1st Oct 2022 1:06pm
Merging the poets if you will ..
I wrote this years ago and it still holds true
Many thanks Steve
Appreciate
I wrote this years ago and it still holds true
Many thanks Steve
Appreciate
1st Oct 2022 6:27pm
No glue. Bad bad. So I've heard. I've seen the loonies living their results.
There are dozens of writing sites. It's tough to pick which ones suit you until you're actually wearing it. This one isn't the worst or best. But it isn't bad! (You're here!)
Write your words. We are all basically stapling ourselves to "Have you seen me" posters, seeing if we can be somewhat found.
Here, you're not lost.
There are dozens of writing sites. It's tough to pick which ones suit you until you're actually wearing it. This one isn't the worst or best. But it isn't bad! (You're here!)
Write your words. We are all basically stapling ourselves to "Have you seen me" posters, seeing if we can be somewhat found.
Here, you're not lost.
1st Oct 2022 6:53pm
I wrote this poem a few years ago but nothing has changed, might be worse actually. I’ve tried other sites but this one still # 1 despite all the people issues. Pandemic really made people freaky and not in a good way. I’m a loner by choice but too much isolation isn’t good for anyones soul…
Appreciate the nod Styx
Thanks
Appreciate the nod Styx
Thanks
1st Oct 2022 6:42pm
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1st Oct 2022 8:34pm
Wow, what a great comment
I'm thrilled that you liked it so much !!
Just the facts stated ID
MANY THANKS
I'm thrilled that you liked it so much !!
Just the facts stated ID
MANY THANKS
1st Oct 2022 8:34pm
Hi PS
Favorite line of the whole masterpiece.
Freedom is cherished:)
Once you start feeling claustrophobic about where you
are gotta make a move:)
Sniff glue
Sniff gas fumes like perfume, does it matter?
Were all a little fudged up otherwise we'd be
accountants where everything makes sense. LOL
Enjoyed this!!!
Favorite line of the whole masterpiece.
Freedom is cherished:)
Once you start feeling claustrophobic about where you
are gotta make a move:)
Sniff glue
Sniff gas fumes like perfume, does it matter?
Were all a little fudged up otherwise we'd be
accountants where everything makes sense. LOL
Enjoyed this!!!
1st Oct 2022 8:40pm
So much to be said about freedom
I remember George W. Bush talking about it every chance he got.
I think he was one of the worst presidents ever but he got the freedom thing right ....
You're a Texan so probably many different trains of thought down there.
Yeah, I put a lot of themes together here. Talking for my heart, ya know ??
Appreciate the visit and comment Adel ...
Thx
I remember George W. Bush talking about it every chance he got.
I think he was one of the worst presidents ever but he got the freedom thing right ....
You're a Texan so probably many different trains of thought down there.
Yeah, I put a lot of themes together here. Talking for my heart, ya know ??
Appreciate the visit and comment Adel ...
Thx
2nd Oct 2022 1:42am
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2nd Oct 2022 11:05pm
This place... sometimes feels like the only place I fit, and other times... well, it's just a place I visit like a voyeur to see a messy corner of humanity. It's weird. I think you portrayed that well.
As for the poets - I'd like to think they'd appreciate each other's perspectives & style. Glue? Probably something more drinkable.
❤️k
As for the poets - I'd like to think they'd appreciate each other's perspectives & style. Glue? Probably something more drinkable.
❤️k
3rd Oct 2022 00:57am
Wrote this a few years ago.
Changed a few things.
Shows my old school roots.
Who sniffs glue anymore ??
Might be time yo
Pass the tube and then the lube …
❤️
Changed a few things.
Shows my old school roots.
Who sniffs glue anymore ??
Might be time yo
Pass the tube and then the lube …
❤️
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
4th Oct 2022 6:41am
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4th Oct 2022 12:01pm
Huff, now that is a blast from the past.
I'm a blast from the past too trying to stay modern in a remote way.
Appreciate the comment Ted
I'm a blast from the past too trying to stay modern in a remote way.
Appreciate the comment Ted
9th Oct 2022 3:50am
A good title is always alluring, but yes I think those two would be down for shenanigans eventually. Sex sells and we are also drawn to crazy zany scenes and scenarios.
BIG LIKE
BIG LIKE
9th Oct 2022 3:58am
