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Pitching Woo
To be pitched woo, charmed,
enchanted and seduced
alas things of a time long past
forgotten and unknown
to this era of fast, fast as you can go…
To be read poetry with gallant "savoir faire"
confident, maybe brash but never crude,
always a gentlemen was the norm,
to court a lady which your eye has caught;
under no circumstance are you to be lewd,
that would just never do
because to woo a woman is an art,
lost by the young, yet could be
recaptured if you are smart.
Ahh… but it is an unknown language that I speak
for you know not the meaning of my speech.
To beguile the lady with words so tender,
gently caressing her cheek
that was a masculine endeavor,
to slowly kiss her lips
enticing her into your arms;
ohhh… what magic could be woven
at the hand of a patient man who was soft spoken,
but I have strayed from the present time,
reminiscing about a bygone era
lost in an epoch when courtship was sublime.
Gypsy Red
March 2012
enchanted and seduced
alas things of a time long past
forgotten and unknown
to this era of fast, fast as you can go…
To be read poetry with gallant "savoir faire"
confident, maybe brash but never crude,
always a gentlemen was the norm,
to court a lady which your eye has caught;
under no circumstance are you to be lewd,
that would just never do
because to woo a woman is an art,
lost by the young, yet could be
recaptured if you are smart.
Ahh… but it is an unknown language that I speak
for you know not the meaning of my speech.
To beguile the lady with words so tender,
gently caressing her cheek
that was a masculine endeavor,
to slowly kiss her lips
enticing her into your arms;
ohhh… what magic could be woven
at the hand of a patient man who was soft spoken,
but I have strayed from the present time,
reminiscing about a bygone era
lost in an epoch when courtship was sublime.
Gypsy Red
March 2012
Written by
marielavoue
(Gypsy Red)
Published 27th Mar 2012
| Edited 4th Apr 2012
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Gypsy
27th Mar 2012 7:14pm
re: Gypsy
27th Mar 2012 8:20pm
Thank you dear Crim, so glad you liked it, I had a moment of nostalgia lol.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
re: re: Gypsy
27th Mar 2012 8:22pm
re: re: re: Gypsy
27th Mar 2012 8:24pm
Love it
27th Mar 2012 8:08pm
So reminds of the first time I saw a musical! I refuse to believe however that this sort of courting is buried and gone. To some extent I think it shows up in every poem written about romantic love.
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re: Love it
27th Mar 2012 8:22pm
I think I am with you Jazzy, I don't believe that romantic courtship is dead, at least I hope it is not.Thanks for stopping by.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
re: re: Love it
27th Mar 2012 8:34pm
Dang I was hopping you would say YOU KNOW you are with me! (laugh) No problem, not much I can do with Spring Break and tons of rain!
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Of Then .....
27th Mar 2012 10:52pm
Busy, busy, incrementally dizzy, lives force fed of notion that rush and race of lust’s (on-the-go) desires trump all the deeper sheltered inner arts within the contemplations of our hearts …… Not so!
So nice to read of (forgotten) times again … Exponentially well done! .. Good Drake’s cape upon the puddle for your dainty carriage-step Midear.
So nice to read of (forgotten) times again … Exponentially well done! .. Good Drake’s cape upon the puddle for your dainty carriage-step Midear.
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re: Of Then .....
28th Mar 2012 4:05pm
Bravo for you, dear Harlequin! Yes, I do believe that we can continue to keep alive some of our finest "arts", teach them to the young and maybe, if we are lucky, they will learn what we already know, That treasured things are best enjoyed slowly.
Thank sir for your wonderful comment.
Gypsy red
Thank sir for your wonderful comment.
Gypsy red
Well written!
28th Mar 2012 3:18pm
So many great lines in this!! Great job.
Like jazz I refuse to believe that this type of courtship is gone!
Like jazz I refuse to believe that this type of courtship is gone!
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re: Well written!
28th Mar 2012 4:07pm
Well Thank you Tav, I am glad you found it to your liking; it is a nostalgic piece reminiscing about how things use to and, can still be if we so choose.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
DELIGHTFUL TO READ
Anonymous
28th Mar 2012 7:46pm
This was wonderful
Thank you for reminding us of the good old days
when we were wooed
Now it is no-woo
Kitty
Thank you for reminding us of the good old days
when we were wooed
Now it is no-woo
Kitty

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re: DELIGHTFUL TO READ
28th Mar 2012 8:08pm
Hahahaha yes miss Kitty you are sooo right! I am thrilled that you enjoyed the ride in my time machine.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
Outstanding
28th Mar 2012 8:11pm
You paint a breath taking picture of what romance
SHOULD be at least the effort that should be made to make romance this way again ...I dont believe it is lost though...with more poems like this you may yet inspire a new generation of romance
SHOULD be at least the effort that should be made to make romance this way again ...I dont believe it is lost though...with more poems like this you may yet inspire a new generation of romance
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re: Outstanding
28th Mar 2012 10:53pm
Thank you so very much for your gracious comment and generous complement.I am humbled and elated that you enjoyed it so much.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
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30th Mar 2012 11:31am
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re: to woo a woman is an art
Hahaha good idea! Yes we have lost many things but I would not mind if could recover this part: "romantic courtship". Thanks for stopping by and lovely comment.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red