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Ambivalence
Emergent,
uncertain
but
optimistic-
realistic,
feeling small,
exposed
and bruised.
Half in my cocoon
and half out in the world,
I'm stuck
in limbo-land
until
my senses show
which way
things
are bound to
go
uncertain
but
optimistic-
realistic,
feeling small,
exposed
and bruised.
Half in my cocoon
and half out in the world,
I'm stuck
in limbo-land
until
my senses show
which way
things
are bound to
go
Published 10th Sep 2022
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11th Sep 2022 6:06am
amusing musings...even manure can be used to help bring about new life...or further musings, hopefully at least as amusing as the last...
11th Sep 2022 12:31pm
I like the structure, it seems to really
mirror the idea of a surfacing ambivalence...
I can feel you pull this one from the air...
I like that very much Ellie...
mirror the idea of a surfacing ambivalence...
I can feel you pull this one from the air...
I like that very much Ellie...
Anonymous
12th Sep 2022 5:10pm
I understand...love it!!
12th Sep 2022 7:14pm
you will find your way, why follow someone's tracks when you can make a path all your own
12th Sep 2022 7:26pm
13th Sep 2022 1:48pm
I know the feeling and it can be frustrating. Particularly when you see others that seem to have a clear direction, while you are driving in circles in a parking lot.
May a light go off and you find your path. Try not beat yourself up too much, a lot of folks are in the same lane.
May a light go off and you find your path. Try not beat yourself up too much, a lot of folks are in the same lane.
15th Sep 2022 10:42pm
