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Tension

You stood there
Close enough to kiss me
Yet the question loomed
Should we?
Simon_III_Msibi
Written by Simon_III_Msibi (Mandla Msibi)
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Re. Tension
16th Oct 2022 8:53pm
Hoi hoi hope this finds you well!

A very kind and gentle rendering of this subject!
Thank you for sharing!!
Kind regards, Gus
JiltedJohnny
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Re: Re. Tension
(Mandla Msibi)
5th Nov 2022 7:49pm
Honestly forgot I wrote this. Thank you for commenting hence reminding me
Simon_III_Msibi

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