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The sound of the Rain

She listens to the dark rain
Whispering Timpani
Lulling her to peaceful rest
From days that never end
She dreams of an unquiet sea
Where Poseidon�s wrath
Turns to calm
The thunder wakes her
And then the rain lulls her
Back to her ocean dreams

Written by James_A_Knight

Published 6th Sep 2022

#love #rain

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Re. The sound of the Rain

PoetSpeak

6th Sep 2022 12:56pm

BIG LIKE BOSS

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James_A_Knight

6th Sep 2022 1:01pm

Thanks for reading it.
glad you liked it
regards
James

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Re. The sound of the Rain

Bluevelvete

6th Sep 2022 12:58pm

The sea is always such a muse. I am enamored by it as I know you are, as well. I thoroughly enjoyed the dreamy imagery and powerful metaphors. The impact and the dichotomy of 'whispering timpani' captures your attention like a whip crack!! Terrifically visceral...

Wonderful work, James.
Thank you for sharing
🌹 💙
B

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James_A_Knight

6th Sep 2022 1:04pm

Hi,
The rain at night is a special thing. if you hear it. I have been rewriting this one, in my head for years. thanks for your kind compliments.
Regards
James

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InDreamz

6th Sep 2022 1:01pm

This is so beautiful n calming...❤

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James_A_Knight

6th Sep 2022 1:06pm

Hi,
thanks for reading.
I am glad that it has a calming effect.
calm moments are rare in this world.
regards
James

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Re. The sound of the Rain

Honoria

6th Sep 2022 6:57pm

Dear J,

Echo all the above comments. This is a lovely write. You�ve expressed magnificently the beauty of the sea and its power of lulling some of us into a soothing sleep. Beautiful piece. H🌷